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= February 21 =

02:55:32, 21 February 2022 review of draft by ChinthakaGK
Hi Dear all, This is my first submission and I have got some notes on this, could you please point out which sentence/s that I need to modify or remove. ChinthakaGK (talk) 02:55, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Asked (and I expect will be answered) at Teahouse, so I see no need for a reply here. David notMD (talk) 08:39, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

07:51:24, 21 February 2022 review of submission by Adrai
@KylieTastic what are the concrete steps/information needed for the submission to be accepted? For example, what is missing compared to this page? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phrase_(software) Adrai (talk) 07:51, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

08:46:14, 21 February 2022 review of draft by Chillibee
Hi I tried to publish an article about the geologic museum 'focusTerra' at the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology (ETH Zurich). After a first revision, the added references have not been accepted as 'published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject' (comment by user Theroadislong). There has also been left a comment by user DGG saying 'museums are usually notable'. May I please ask you to double-check if there still is need to revise the article (i.e., add more references)? Cheers

Chillibee (talk) 08:46, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

09:36:26, 21 February 2022 review of submission by LodoVena
LodoVena (talk) 09:36, 21 February 2022 (UTC) gadchiroli bagiya tabana — Preceding unsigned comment added by LodoVena (talk • contribs) 09:38, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Are you SURE you want to edit in this topic area? —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 10:16, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

09:55:45, 21 February 2022 review of draft by LemanXL
Hi, please indicate what I need to add and what part I need to add to confirm. Information has not been shared for 2 weeks

LemanXL (talk) 09:55, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * This draft is written as an advertizement, and a pretty blatant one at that. What is your connexion to Locavis? —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 10:18, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

12:16:09, 21 February 2022 review of submission by Emmy1707
Hello, I have a question about reliable sources. The article (Draft:Philipp Hochmair) was declined twice because the submission was not adequately supported by reliable sources. I have added the filmography and a few newspaper articles, but I don't know if that is enough. It would be a great pity if the article is declined a third time. Thank you very much for the support.Emmy1707 (talk) 12:16, 21 February 2022 (UTC) Emmy1707 (talk) 12:16, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

13:49:58, 21 February 2022 review of submission by Pat-obg-79
Hello, my item was rejected twice. This article already exists in the German Wikipedia. Why was the article rejected in English Wikipedia? This is the german article: https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/SEMA_CAD-Software This is the draft of the english version: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:SEMA_3D_CAD/CAM_Software

Pat-obg-79 (talk) 13:49, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Each language version of Wikipedia is its own project, with their own editors and policies. What is acceptable on one version is not necessarily acceptable on another. Please read the comments left by the reviewer. 331dot (talk) 15:18, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

15:12:04, 21 February 2022 review of draft by Abraham Abdul Miel Smith
Abraham Abdul Miel Smith (talk) 15:12, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

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 * Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. 331dot (talk) 15:16, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

17:57:01, 21 February 2022 review of submission by Jonknox12
Hi all,

For a little while now, I have been trying to get this draft approved for Denise C. Park, a researcher at The University of Texas at Dallas, and have received a lot of feedback about sourcing information. I do currently believe that the current edition's sources match Wikipedia's guidelines, and I have added a stub template, since the current draft is far from encyclopedic. Is there anything more that needs to be done, or should this article be ok for approval?

Any and all responses are greatly appreciated!

Thank you, Jonknox12 (talk) 17:57, 21 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Denise C. Park has been approved. David notMD (talk) 11:20, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

21:42:51, 21 February 2022 review of submission by Rfernandes1994
Hi guys,

I'd like to create this page on behalf of a company I work for. Can I get some more useful guidance on how to make this appropriate for publishing. Appreciate the guidelines and this may 'promote' the company. If terms like 'award-winning' are removed does that help?

Thanks!

Rfernandes1994 (talk) 21:42, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * , it appears the draft has been nominated for speedy deletion based on being promotional. I did a quick search online for references and it does not appear that the company would meet notability guidelines so recreation would not be possible. The relevant guideline is WP:NCORP which the company must meet, including having references that meet WP:ORGCRIT. --CNMall41 (talk) 21:46, 21 February 2022 (UTC)