Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2022 February 4

= February 4 =

03:10:01, 4 February 2022 review of draft by Syakir isyraq bin sallehuddin
how to improve my draft so that wikipedia will accept it? Syakir isyraq bin sallehuddin (talk) 03:10, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Write in prose, not bulleted lists. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 03:45, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

03:14:36, 4 February 2022 review of submission by Syakir isyraq bin sallehuddin
anyone can help me to improve my wiki?pls help me to solve this problem. i dont want to be scolded by my boss. i've tried many times to make this wiki and it's always have been rejected please someone help me to improve this wiki Syakir isyraq bin sallehuddin (talk) 03:14, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * You must first declare as a paid editor, see WP:PAID. This is a Terms of Use requirement and mandatory. Wikipedia, to be frank, has no interest in what your boss might be demanding of you.  You have essentially written a resume; that is not an encyclopedia article, which should summarize what independent reliable sources state about a topic, not merely list its accomplishments.  Please read Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 08:52, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Request on 03:17:02, 4 February 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Thecarguru2
Steven Salowsky Salutations. I am new here and a fellow stranger that was a wikipedian assisted on very amateur attempt I made at my first article. I see that the draft states the Comment: The sources are mostly about Rich Benoit, not Salowsky. Devonian Wombat (talk) 21:21, 3 February 2022 (UTC) And noticed the sources do include more about Benoit being he has a louder presence on their YouTube channel, but each article mentioned Salowsky as a fan and subscriber of the channel, he is half the operation, being the sole designer and also a builder of the vehicles which deserves its own merit and credit. It is rather odd that they focus on one person more than the other, how would you suggest improving this, as the cited sources are reputable and do give him credit?

Thecarguru2 (talk) 03:17, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Honestly, if the both of them do not have coverage independent of the other, the article should cover both of them equally, not one or the other. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 03:48, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

03:20:41, 4 February 2022 review of draft by Daniel Orgesta
Daniel Orgesta (talk) 03:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * No sources, no article, no debate. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 03:49, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

03:50:29, 4 February 2022 review of submission by 고양이 발자국
This is company information, so please review. 고양이 발자국 (talk) 03:50, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. This reads more like an investors' bulleted list instead of an encyclopaedia article, and its sources are all directly connected to Shiftee in some manner. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 04:13, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

10:06:16, 4 February 2022 review of submission by JosephTonio
The article I submitted got disapproved. Could anyone help me out by letting me know what possibly could be the reason why my article is not approved? I am new to wikipedia user so I would require kind assistance from the wikis here. Please do let me know what changes to make. JosephTonio (talk) 10:06, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Please review the messages left on the draft, as well as the policies linked to therein. 331dot (talk) 10:57, 4 February 2022 (UTC)