Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2022 July 13

= July 13 =

07:02:24, 13 July 2022 review of submission by 2603:6081:7740:435:51A1:27E2:4D0:4A97
2603:6081:7740:435:51A1:27E2:4D0:4A97 (talk) 07:02, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

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 * The draft is obvious vandalism. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 07:47, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

11:37:10, 13 July 2022 review of submission by Abdullahmehta
Hi! I got a notification for speedy deletion after I submitted the article for review, owing to possible promotional material and advertisement. Having gone through the material again, I understand that the phrasing was promotional in certain areas. I have rephrased several parts of the article so as to make it as objective as possible, and would like for it to be reviewed again please. Thank you!

Abdullahmehta (talk) 11:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)


 * You have to submit the new version of the draft for review, and you haven't even created it yet. Deb (talk) 15:28, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
 * @Abdullahmehta A Gartner login page cannot be used as a source. 71.228.112.175 (talk) 06:32, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Am i allowed to use the company website as a source for certain information, such as company headquarters and founders? Abdullahmehta (talk) 11:15, 15 July 2022 (UTC)

15:52:38, 13 July 2022 review of draft by Meistravels
Hello, I submitted an article "The Raw Society" and it has been denied twice. I include multiple independent sources including from National Geographic of Spain and it still was denied. Can someone help point me in the right direction? I've linked to multiple independent sources and articles and it's still getting denied. Please help!

Meistravels (talk) 15:52, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
 * The draft is just advertising the society and is littered with spam links to their website. We don't use any external links in the body of an article. Theroadislong (talk) 16:27, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Okay thanks I will remove all the external links, would that fix the issue? It has independent sources. Meistravels (talk) 15:14, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Re-edited. Can you review again and let me know if it's good to go? Meistravels (talk) 16:25, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * @Meistravels See WP:EL. "External links normally should not be placed in the body of an article." QiuLiming1 (talk) 16:36, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, I just reworked the draft and took out all external links and sentences that weren't backed up my verifiable sources/made it sound less like an advertisement. Can someone please help me get it approved? What else do I need to do? Meistravels (talk) 15:20, 14 July 2022 (UTC)

22:48:05, 13 July 2022 review of submission by Simohayhafan
Every time i fix a new prob in my Suomi KP-22 article a nnew one appears. im done with it. and this website. i feel like im being trolled Simohayhafan (talk) 22:48, 13 July 2022 (UTC)


 * I don't think you could use first person as your style when writing an article. See TONE Also there's no reference provided. QiuLiming1 (talk) 00:15, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Trust me. You're not being trolled.  You have to do things right, but we're here to help. I Googled The Suomi KP-22 to find you some sources, and don't see anything in the search results. If you can find anything, take a look at this as an example of how to write a gun article using proper sources: Suomi KP/-31. Also, you really should read WP:YFA, or you might get more unexpected advice. TechnoTalk (talk) 03:46, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * @Simohayhafan "then beyond this point i cannot grant any information has uhh lets see here. i cant find anything more about it." Not appropriate language for an encyclopedia article. 71.228.112.175 (talk) 06:34, 15 July 2022 (UTC)