Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2022 July 23

= July 23 =

08:21:12, 23 July 2022 review of submission by Amadathil
Amadathil (talk) 08:21, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a place to post someone's resume or list of accomplishments.  A Wikipedia article about a person must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the person, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable person.  Please read Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 08:24, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

08:24:09, 23 July 2022 review of draft by Karissa 247
Hello there, I need help with my draft. I have had the draft deleted severally and this is my first work here. Mostly, it's been deleted because of the reference segment. Can I please get a review on the draft before I submit it for approval? Thank you.

Karissa 247 (talk) 08:24, 23 July 2022 (UTC)


 * @Karissa 247 Not to mention your tone, just an analysis to your sources:
 * 1. Your name only appear one time in the article, and it's looks like an advertisement.
 * 2. See above. It's also a primary source.
 * 3. See above.
 * 4. See above
 * 5. Did not get the book on google book, I can't tell if it's good source or not.
 * 6. Only one sentence coverage
 * 7. Did not even cover the name.
 * A good essay for you to read is WP:109PAPERS. QiuLiming1 (talk) 16:08, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Also, no evidence of meeting the singer notability guideline WP:SINGER. I belive she is too young to be written in Wikipedia, unless you found some other really reliable, secondary sources which is not related to the singer. QiuLiming1 (talk) 16:11, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
 * @Karissa 247 The image is likely to be deleted, since it is not clear that the copyright holder is the person who uploaded the picture and licensed it under the Creative Commons license that is mentioned on the image's page. 71.228.112.175 (talk) 08:14, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

21:11:00, 23 July 2022 review of draft by Dark Angel23490
Hi, I would love to know if it's ok if I place links to the leading newspapers in Israel as a source of knowledge? Or does it have to be an American source...? Also, I would love your input how can I improve my article?

Dark Angel23490 (talk) 21:11, 23 July 2022 (UTC)


 * @Dark Angel23490 See WP:NONENG. Non-English sources are allowed but they generally take longer time to be reviewed. QiuLiming1 (talk) 21:42, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
 * I see, thank you. I would love for your help if you can see the value I wrote "Shay Wize". It's my first time, and i would love to know what you think... ^^ Dark Angel23490 (talk) 21:49, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
 * I don't know how could I help with this draft since I don't even know the language. QiuLiming1 (talk) 22:12, 23 July 2022 (UTC)