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= May 18 =

04:45:25, 18 May 2022 review of submission by Digihemchand
Below this line, tell us why you are requesting a re-review. Take as many lines as you need.-->}} i want to share knowledge about vfx company in india Digihemchand (talk) 04:45, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * What you wrote is an advert. We delete those on discovery. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 05:04, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * What you wrote is an advert. We delete those on discovery. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 05:04, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

06:26:05, 18 May 2022 review of submission by The Puneet Singh
The Puneet Singh (talk) 06:26, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * What is your question, @The Puneet Singh? The draft in your sandbox has been deleted as promotional, in case that's what you were wondering. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:30, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * what i wrote was not promotional. it was just to share company information and that too in subtle form. however it got isapproved again. is there any other means by which it can be uploaded. The Puneet Singh (talk) 11:43, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * To share company information is a definition of promotion, if that is your goal you will not find Wikipedia a hospitable environment as we frown upon any form of promotion. We only want to see what others have written about a subject on their own accord. If multiple reliable source have not written about the subject then they will not be considered notable. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 15:36, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

10:49:26, 18 May 2022 review of draft by Dumblah
Sorry, please advise how to delete my draft User:Dumblah/sandbox, which I submitted for review. By mistake, I submitted the same article as draft Persona Identities Inc.

Dumblah (talk) 10:49, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * @Dumblah deletion has been requested. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:28, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * I've deleted it. If you want it back in the future then you can ask at WP:REFUND.  Hut 8.5  11:53, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks! 137.132.213.221 (talk) 09:20, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

11:31:42, 18 May 2022 review of draft by RosiGhalach
Hi. Could you please explain why exactly you are rejecting my submission? You have mentioned that it looks like an ad, however, I have stated pure information about when Renderforest was founded and what products it has. Could you bring one specific example for me to understand what part of the article feels like an ad? RosiGhalach (talk) 11:31, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * @RosiGhalach: at a quick glance, the draft reads to me like WP:ADMASQ rather than an encyclopaedia entry; it is the overall tone and style which comes across as trying to sell the service. And one specific, concrete thing is the pricing information, which is a sales & marketing feature and has no place in an encyclopaedia.
 * BTW, just to clarify, your draft has not been rejected, only declined. Rejection would mean it has been turned down and cannot be resubmitted. Decline means it has been turned down for now, but can be resubmitted once the reasons for declining have been addressed. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:43, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

11:46:48, 18 May 2022 review of submission by Meheqkhokhar
Meheqkhokhar (talk) 11:46, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * Draft:Meheq Khokhar

Hello - you've not asked a question. The current draft is extremely short and has no citations, so is not going to be approved. Take a look at Help:Intro for a simple guide on how to add sources. Nosebagbear (talk) 13:11, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

13:06:22, 18 May 2022 review of submission by Meheqkhokhar
Meheqkhokhar (talk) 13:06, 18 May 2022 (UTC)


 * @Meheqkhokhar: you haven't actually asked any questions, but I'm guessing you want to know why your submission wasn't accepted. The first thing to say is, you really should not be submitting your autobiography. For reasons why this is, see WP:AUTOBIO.
 * Secondly, every article must be supported by reliable sources, which are needed both to verify the contents and to establish the subject's notability; this is important for all articles, and especially so for ones on living people. Your draft doesn't cite a single source. See WP:REFB and WP:GNG for advice.
 * Thirdly, you twice submitted a blank draft, because the little content that there was was hidden inside comment tags. In the future, please use the preview function to check that your content appears the way you intended, before publishing. Or at least check after it is published.
 * And fourthly, when a draft is declined, you're meant to address the reasons for the decline before resubmitting. It seems that you just resubmitted (three times) without any improvement. At some point the reviewers are bound to conclude that this is unlikely to result in a publishable article, and halt the process. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:25, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

13:38:49, 18 May 2022 review of submission by Gageweston
My article was rejected, but I did not receive any reason why. Please let me know why it was rejected

Gageweston (talk) 13:38, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * The reviewer perhaps could have been clearer, but the man you wrote about does not meet the definition of a notable politician. Merely seeking office is insufficient. They must either win their election, or be notable for something else. 331dot (talk) 13:43, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

17:38:39, 18 May 2022 review of submission by AvonMooch
Good Day! I am having trouble locating Draft: David J. Brown to be able to address the shortcomings (EDIT) of this recently rejected article I can access it but I can't seem to find the editing tab. Thank you! AvonMooch (talk) 17:38, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * The draft is at Draft:David J. Brown (artist), but rejection means that it cannot be resubmitted. 331dot (talk) 17:50, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * The subject can't be addressed again? AvonMooch (talk) 21:08, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * It cannot be resubmitted unless there is a dramatic change in circumstances, such as new information that was not considered by the reviewer. If so, you must appeal to the reviewer directly. 331dot (talk) 21:13, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the info! AvonMooch (talk) 21:21, 18 May 2022 (UTC)