Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2022 May 3

= May 3 =

06:54:34, 3 May 2022 review of submission by PriyadharshiniRajkumar
Priyadharshini Rajkumar is an notable co artist in indian film industry for past 25 years PriyadharshiniRajkumar (talk) 06:54, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * You seem to be writing about yourself, while not forbidden, this is highly discouraged, please read the autobiography policy. It is usually difficult for people to write about themselves here, because in order to do so one must set aside everything they know about themselves and only write based on what independent reliable sources say about them.  Your draft was rejected, and as such will not be considered further, as it appears that you do not meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable performer. 331dot (talk) 07:20, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Request on 10:44:24, 3 May 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Tapobhumi
Hello Respected One, one of our drafts : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Mohini_Ghosh we have again made some changes to qualify for wikipedia, hope to hear positive response, thank you - have a nice day

Tapobhumi (talk) 10:44, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * , who is we? Are you a company or a team? What is your connection to the subject of the draft?--CNMall41 (talk) 01:32, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
 * I belong from Uttar Pradesh, that's why this article was prepared by the bhojpuri artist on wikipedia, whose we are fans, watch their movies continuously.
 * Mohini Ghosh is an Indian actress known for her work in the Bhojpuri film industry. After making her debut in the 2013 movie Dil Ho Gail Qurban, she went on to appear in movies such as Vijay Tilak (2014), Dulara (2015), and Dildar Sajna (2016). Her 2017 release includes the movie Jila Champaran directed by Madhukar Anand Tapobhumi (talk) 10:13, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Dulaara (2015 film) - Please check
 * Radhe (upcoming film) - Please check
 * and she got award as Most Beautiful Actress
 * International Bhojpuri Film Awards
 * Please find all news in
 * 1- Times of India for Mohini Ghosh - https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/topic/Mohini-Ghosh/news
 * 2- Google News Topics for Mohini Ghosh - https://news.google.com/topics/CAAqLAgKIiZDQkFTRmdvTkwyY3ZNVEZtTURRd2F6WjViQklGWlc0dFIwSW9BQVAB?ceid=IN:en&oc=3
 * Tapobhumi (talk) 09:07, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
 * 1- Dulaara (2015 film) - https://www.imdb.com/title/tt4868958/
 * 2- Jila Champaran
 * Reference :-
 * https://in.bookmyshow.com/movies/jila-champaran-/ET00062604
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movie-details/jila-champaran/movieshow/61236943.cms
 * 3- Radhe (upcoming film)
 * Reference :-
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movie-details/radhe/movieshow/61982611.cms Tapobhumi (talk) 09:14, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Please see WP:NACTOR which says the subject of an article has to be known for multiple notable roles in notable films. I'm not seeing much in the sources about starring roles except short profiles of her with stock photos. TechnoTalk (talk) 05:38, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for Getting back me, according to WP:NACTOR
 * Has had significant roles in multiple notable films, television shows, stage performances, or other productions
 * Yes, as i read and watch her movies and read news articles
 * she worked in lot of movies
 * for your reference, i am sharing you artist profile link and movies links
 * https://in.bookmyshow.com/person/mohini-ghosh/38469
 * https://g.co/kgs/gHzUJi
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/topic/Mohini-Ghosh/movies Tapobhumi (talk) 09:59, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
 * BookMyShow is a virtually content-free profile, we don't cite Google search results, and Times of India's articles are considered to be borderline-unusable making its profiles even more so. These sources are not the in-depth, non-routine, independent articles about her written by identifiable authors and published in outlets with editorial oversight that fact-checks, discloses, corrects, and retracts that we are looking for. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 00:14, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-shakes-her-belly-on-mithun-chakrabortys-song-tere-har-sawal/articleshow/89741324.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-shares-a-stunning-click-from-the-photoshoot/articleshow/88804658.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-burns-the-dance-floor-with-her-moves-on-samantha-item-song-oo-antava/articleshow/88947392.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/watch-mohini-ghosh-grooves-to-nora-fatehis-hit-song-kusu-kusu/articleshow/88668064.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/web-stories/these-unseen-pics-of-mohini-ghosh-are-too-adorable-to-be-missed/photostory/83565638.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/panchali-mohini-ghosh-shares-her-excitement-of-working-in-the-rajkumar-r-pandey-directorial/articleshow/65164995.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-in-reza/articleshow/20586500.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-in-dil-ho-gail-tohar/articleshow/46105714.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-is-busy-shooting-for-her-next-film-dulaara/articleshow/46608644.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-ready-to-go-the-bollywood-way/articleshow/37529405.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-starts-a-war-against-dowry-seekers/articleshow/43990901.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/sudeep-pandey-and-mohini-ghosh-in-pyar-mein/articleshow/30053731.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/mohini-ghosh-is-shooting-for-dil-ho-gail-qurban/articleshow/16766905.cms
 * https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/bhojpuri/movies/news/miss-kolkata-mohini-in-bhojpuri-film/articleshow/14670940.cms
 * Please find all news in
 * 1- Times of India for Mohini Ghosh - https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/topic/Mohini-Ghosh/news
 * 2- Google News Topics for Mohini Ghosh - https://news.google.com/topics/CAAqLAgKIiZDQkFTRmdvTkwyY3ZNVEZtTURRd2F6WjViQklGWlc0dFIwSW9BQVAB?ceid=IN:en&oc=3 Tapobhumi (talk) 08:54, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

14:59:59, 3 May 2022 review of draft by Gage98
This page was rejected for reading like an advertisement. I would like help on what part reads like an advertisement. The company overview and history are not an advertisement. The only thing I can think that may read like that is the product overviews. If that is the case, please tell me how to fix this. Possibly a solution is just deleting the product overview section. Gage98 (talk) 14:59, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not a place to tell about the existence of a company and what it considers to be its own history. An article about a company must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets Wikipedia's special definition of a notable company. Press releases, announcements of routine business activities, interviews, and other primary sources do not establish notability. Please read Your First Article.
 * I gather that you have an association with this company. If so, please read WP:COI and WP:PAID for information on required formal disclosures. 331dot (talk) 15:29, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * @Gage98 What parts read like an advertisement?
 * Theroadislong already mentioned "wide range of products and services" in the draft
 * "also owned such companies as"
 * "created change for DIT‐MCO"
 * "the company catalog boasted"
 * Other issues: The entire Products group should be deleted. Wikipedia is not a catalog. Who would keep the Products section up to date, and do you see other encyclopedias with this detailed level of information?
 * It's not important that "Hannon changed his title from engineer to sales manager" or that "Mr. Korholz exchanged DITMCO and its parent holding company, the Xebec Corporation, to the National General Corporation for a block of Pan American Sulfur stock". Does that show how this company is notable?  I am not a reviewer, but I don't think anything in the "Ownership" section belongs in an encyclopedia.
 * This company might be notable, but I don't think this article shows that quite yet. You can still update and resubmit the draft.  Good luck. 73.127.147.187 (talk) 17:53, 7 May 2022 (UTC)

Request on 15:37:26, 3 May 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by KPC091992
KPC091992 (talk) 15:37, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

KAMPANAT
 * Sorry but your draft has no content? Theroadislong (talk) 17:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

16:03:14, 3 May 2022 review of draft by July Garza III
July Garza III (talk) 16:03, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question. 331dot (talk) 17:40, 3 May 2022 (UTC)