Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2023 April 4

= April 4 =

09:21:21, 4 April 2023 review of draft by Aeonbond
Aeonbond (talk) 09:21, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * @Aeonbond: there is no such draft. Do you mean Draft:Kotteri Komath Sri Bhagwatish Temple? In which case, what is your question? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:29, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
 * @Aeonbond The draft is one unreferenced sentence. David10244 (talk) 08:37, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

09:43:58, 4 April 2023 review of submission by 112.209.28.10
Hi i im a 112.209.28.10 my draft is rejected and add a ref 112.209.28.10 (talk) 09:43, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * That's not a question. What do you wish to ask (about this rejected draft)? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:19, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

09:59:42, 4 April 2023 review of submission by 103.164.238.18
103.164.238.18 (talk) 09:59, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * You don't ask a question, but this draft has been rejected and won't be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:20, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

10:04:06, 4 April 2023 review of submission by Jpmishra96
I have edited the article as per the guideline provided by User:Asilvering. Please check and let me know if I need to contribute more information to the article. Jpmishra96 (talk) 10:04, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * @Jpmishra96: without doing a detailed assessment (you get that when you submit this for review and a reviewer goes through it), there is quite a lot of unreferenced content, with several paragraphs without a single citation. You need to ensure that every material statement and anything potentially contentious is clearly supported by referencing. It's also not clear what makes this person notable, given that all the sources cited are primary. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:24, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
 * I think he's almost certainly notable, given that he appears on the Odisha government website and appears to have had a scholarly article written about him. But please don't cite researchgate or academia.edu - these are hosting websites, not the "original" publishing location of an article. We want to see that someone has done peer-reviewed academic research about him, and it's much easier for reviewers to see that if you properly cite the articles. Likewise, cite the book you got the information from, rather than using a worldcat link on its own. The automatic citation tool built into the Visual Editor will generate a link to worldcat along with the citation if you copy-paste the ISBN of the book you're citing into it. Good luck! -- asilvering (talk) 21:35, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

14:52:13, 4 April 2023 review of draft by 2600:1001:B110:6978:38ED:DA23:33F1:B4E5
2600:1001:B110:6978:38ED:DA23:33F1:B4E5 (talk) 14:52, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * What is your question? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:56, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

15:55:58, 4 April 2023 review of submission by Bunkw. Bertus
Bunkw. Bertus (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * @Bunkw. Bertus: you don't ask a question, but this draft has been rejected and won't be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:19, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

19:00:33, 4 April 2023 review of submission by Warezalex911
Hi, I would like to request advice on how to make this page more suitable to be approved.

Warezalex911 (talk) 19:00, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Reviewers have already answered that question in their comments on the article. Have you read them? If you don't understand them, asking a specific question about what you don't understand will make it easier for us to give you a helpful answer. -- asilvering (talk) 21:37, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

20:15:50, 4 April 2023 review of draft by Paradiselost79
Recently saw musician and was impressed. He has done a lot of world traveling and wanted to be sure he was on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_hammered_dulcimer_players.

Paradiselost79 (talk) 20:15, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * You haven't submitted the draft! But I can tell you that in its present state it will be declined. If you simply want to add him to the list you linked there, go ahead - just make sure to add a footnote to some secondary coverage about him (rather than his personal website, press kit, or the like). -- asilvering (talk) 21:39, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

23:18:55, 4 April 2023 review of submission by 2600:4041:5518:200:8CD1:EB6E:5A3:450
We are asking for re-evaluation due to our publishing efforts with Outer Terror - SEO Link can be found here - https://www.google.com/search?q=outer+terror&rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS928US929&oq=outer+terror+&aqs=chrome.0.69i59l4j69i60j69i65l3.1657j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

2600:4041:5518:200:8CD1:EB6E:5A3:450 (talk) 23:18, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 05:21, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
 * @DoubleGrazing Weird, one or more of the reviewers is saying "Needs Updated High Notoriety Sources".  Ummmm.... David10244 (talk) 09:11, 6 April 2023 (UTC)