Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2023 July 14

= July 14 =

09:28, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Yusufyilmazyz5
I'm not clear on why my draft was declined. please be more descriptive Yusufyilmazyz5 (talk) 09:28, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Please read the message left by the reviewer and the pages linked in their message carefully. In short, your draft is completely unsourced; all articles must summarize what independent reliable sources say about the topic, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of(in this case) a notable musician. Please note that the best way to write an article is to first gather the sources and then summarize them- not to write a text and then look for the sources to support it, see WP:BACKWARD.  All statements about living people must be sourced, per the Biographies of Living Persons policy.
 * The promotional language needs to be removed- stuff like his "journey". If there is no information about his personal life, then nothing needs to be said about it at all- everyone's background generally serves to inspire them. 331dot (talk) 09:34, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

09:42, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Rohitkumar8055
Hi

Can you pls assist me with required changes that need to be done on this article to get it publish successfully.

Thanks Rohitkumar8055 (talk) 09:42, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * It has been rejected, there is nothing you can do. Theroadislong (talk) 09:44, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * , your draft is riddled with overtly promotional content in violation of the Neutral point of view, which is a core content policy. Examples include and  and . It is incomprehensible to me why you would think that such overtly promotional garbage would belong in a neutrally written encyclopedia, but that's where we are, aren't we? Cullen328 (talk) 09:57, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

10:17, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Papisean
I created an article for a compny, it has several reference links you can check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:LVP_Group. But it was rejected.

i also created another article for a business personality, with up to 10 external reference links, yet it was rejected too

How many reference sources will an article have for it to be approved for publishing? Papisean (talk) 10:17, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * All of your references are primary so contribute nothing to establishing any notability. Theroadislong (talk) 10:20, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

10:27, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Rohanacharekar1999
need help as the artical was rejected due to follwing reasions :- This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. If you would like to continue working on the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you have not resolved the issues listed above, your draft will be declined again and potentially deleted. If you need extra help, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. Please do not remove reviewer comments or this notice until the submission is accepted. Rohanacharekar1999 (talk) 10:27, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Please specify the help you are looking for. I can say that promotional/marketing language like "Prashant Shinde embarked on his acting journey" and "Throughout his six-year journey in the performing arts" needs to be removed/reworded.  You say things like "Prashant Shinde has gained recognition for his exceptional versatility" but don't describe who says that about him. Please also read referencing for beginners to learn how to properly format references and place them in-line next to the text being cited. All information about a living person must be sourced, see the biographies of living persons policy. You will also need to demonstrate how he meets the definition of a notable actor or more broadly a notable person. 331dot (talk) 10:50, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

12:55, 14 July 2023 review of submission by 106.66.27.127
Tell me why this submission was declined and also tell me whether some information was wrong in this post, after all everything is true in it, yet why did you decline it? 106.66.27.127 (talk) 12:55, 14 July 2023 (UTC)


 * There are no reliable sources mentioned in the draft. WikiNews is not reliable. It was rejected, meaning it is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. Sungodtemple (talk &#8226; contribs) 12:59, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

20:50, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Fortheloveofart45
Hello, I'm requesting assistance on how to get this article edited to include more sources and tips on how to improve the post in general since this is my first submission. Any guidance you can provide will be appreciated! Thanks in advance! Fortheloveofart45 (talk) 20:50, 14 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi @Fortheloveofart45 might be notable but it may take a trip the the library along with determining if he (person) is notable versus the galleries, meaning if most of the in-depth coverage is about one of his galleries then the article's topic should be about that gallery rather than about him. S0091 (talk) 21:15, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

23:54, 14 July 2023 review of submission by Voorts
I nominated this page for AfC, but I just saw the backlog is several months long and I'd like to just go ahead and publish it myself. How do I remove this from the submissions queue? voorts (talk/contributions) 23:54, 14 July 2023 (UTC)