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= June 6 =

03:51, 6 June 2023 review of submission by Stavindzoa
He has acted in the movies and He is an singer. Stavindzoa (talk) 03:51, 6 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Anybody answer to this. Stavindzoa (talk) 02:37, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
 * @Stavindzoa: answer what? You haven't asked a question. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:26, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

04:19, 6 June 2023 review of submission by SylviaLardner
Hi, this page keeps being rejected and I really can't understand why. Can anyone help? SylviaLardner (talk) 04:19, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * The draft has been "declined", not "rejected".  "Rejected" has a specific meaning here, that resubmission is not possible.  "Declined" means that resubmission is possible.  Have you seen the message left by the reviewer?  I restored a prior review; all reviews must remain on the draft. 331dot (talk) 09:20, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I left a comment on the submission. Skarmory   (talk •   contribs)  06:28, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi Skarmory, thanks for the feedback - I'm still a little confused. There's a number of key, highly reputable source references used in the article that well establish notability, including ABC Australia (Australia's major public broadcaster), LA Weekly, The Australian, Sydney Morning Herald newspapers for start. Links below:
 * https://www.abc.net.au/radio/programs/nightlife/the-writers-sue-smethurst/12930482
 * https://www.theage.com.au/national/victoria/book-tells-of-family-s-epic-holocaust-escape-to-live-and-laugh-again-20201028-p569c8.html
 * https://www.theaustralian.com.au/subscribe/news/1/?sourceCode=TAWEB_WRE170_a_GGL&dest=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.theaustralian.com.au%2Farts%2Freview%2Fhow-circus-clown-kubush-horowitz-escaped-the-holocaust-by-performing-for-the-nazis%2Fnews-story%2Fb63926d8913e196ce0572ee65f55760a&memtype=anonymous&mode=premium&v21=dynamic-groupa-test-noscore&V21spcbehaviour=append
 * https://www.laweekly.com/coffee-tea-or-handcuffs/
 * Do I need to just put these higher up on the actual reference listing? I appreciate your help thanks. SylviaLardner (talk) 10:06, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

05:40, 6 June 2023 review of submission by 2A02:A03F:E0F5:D200:2198:F0BE:C3A3:4D6
Can it be more clear what needs to be changed for the page been published? 2A02:A03F:E0F5:D200:2198:F0BE:C3A3:4D6 (talk) 05:40, 6 June 2023 (UTC)


 * The draft has been deleted. 331dot (talk) 09:18, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

11:55, 6 June 2023 review of submission by Decasurger
Hi, I'm curious about when this article, Draft:National Dong Hwa University College of Science and Engineering, will get reviewed. Thank you! Decasurger (talk) 11:55, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * We can't give you a specific date. As noted on your draft, "This may take 4 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 4,612 pending submissions waiting for review.". 331dot (talk) 12:57, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I will say that it reads very much like a promotional brochure for the college, and doesn't seem to summarize what independent sources choose to say about it. 331dot (talk) 12:59, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your further explanation and suggestions! I'll fine tune its tone Decasurger (talk) 13:47, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

16:20, 6 June 2023 review of submission by Smstarck
the page was recently reviewed with this comment: "No independent source listed in the draft discusses the organization directly; just the projects that this organization did 6 June 2023 (UTC)"

Would it be helpful if this association was already listed on an existing Wikipedia page, such as one that lists historical associations in Texas, or oral histories of Texas? Would that qualify as an independent source?

Smstarck (talk) 16:20, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid not, as Wikipedia is not a reliable source. Theroadislong (talk) 16:22, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

20:21, 6 June 2023 review of submission by Shashwat185
Help me publish this draft. Shashwat185 (talk) 20:21, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
 * IMDb is not a reliable source. Breathless tone is not appropriate for an encyclopaedia it will need a complete re-write, unacceptable content includes “a prominent figure” “she possessed a deep-rooted passion” “her creative journey” “displaying her talent“ “renowned Iranian filmmaker” “exceptional collaboration” “ability to select intriguing and compelling content” “captivating stories” “acclaimed auteurs” “boasts an impressive collection” “visionary producer” “a leading figure in the world of film” etc etc. Theroadislong (talk) 20:30, 6 June 2023 (UTC)