Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2023 May 31

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06:23, 31 May 2023 review of submission by Rev128
Hi,

Kindly request your support in understanding how I can create this page for United Media Services. I have shared references for all the text, can I rewrite it to make it a more neutral point of view and redraft the article?

Please advice me on the this. Rev128 (talk) 06:23, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * @Rev128: this draft has been deleted as promotional, because Wikipedia does not allow advertising or promotion. You should also not be writing about a business with which you have a connection of some sort (including but not limited to being an employee or owner), without making the necessary disclosure (see WP:PAID). If this is your only objective on Wikipedia, then you should stop now. If this business is genuinely notable, then someone unconnected to it will one day write about it. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:16, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * I am in no way connected to the business, kindly don't make assumptions. I am the someone who is unconnected to the business, and creating the page. Please help me understand how i can publish the page. Rev128 (talk) 08:02, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * We have articles here, not pages. How did you come to edit about United Media Services?  If you don't work for them, you should be, because you wrote excellent marketing copy for them.  Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about a business and what it does.  An article about a business must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the business, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable business.  Wikipedia wants to know what independent sources say is important/signficant/influential about the business, not merely have a summary of what it does and its routine activities.  Please read Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 08:11, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes, so i have added newspaper references and picked up the text from the newspaper articles which are independent sources speaking about the company. None of it was written by me personally, so in that case what should be adding in as content. Maybe i can start with lesser content on the page. Very basic stuff with references kept. Will that be okay to proceed? 85.154.39.118 (talk) 12:20, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * I have in fact added a bloomberg article reference as well, and many other local newspapers. 85.154.39.118 (talk) 12:21, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * @Rev128: how did you pick this particular topic to write about, especially as your very first edit? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:11, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Please do not make blatant assumptions. I live on top of the building where the united media services office is located, and I've been seeing the office for ages now. And hence, decided to write about it. 85.154.39.118 (talk) 12:18, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * The draft has now been deleted as blatant advertising. As I said, if you don't work for them, you should. 331dot (talk) 17:19, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

06:30, 31 May 2023 review of submission by GreeninHeaven
please help me to edit it with the information from this website https://soundbetter.com/profiles/383206-qeis GreeninHeaven (talk) 06:30, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * @GreeninHeaven: this draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:06, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

15:43, 31 May 2023 review of submission by Neelesh Pandiyath
I am publishing article in Wikipedia on  personal interest by self learning. Now a days it is my passion to contribute in Wikipedia. I need assistance to make my article complying to the norms of wikipedia. Neelesh Pandiyath (talk) 15:43, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Please see the advice left by reviewers at the top of your draft. It's not clear that this military officer meets our definition of notability. 331dot (talk) 17:16, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

17:51, 31 May 2023 review of submission by AlienParadox
Considering that all information provided in this article is true and the references provided in this article are from renown news agencies in north India, I can't figure out why the article was declined. Please clarify the reason for the decline of the article. AlienParadox (talk) 17:51, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * @AlienParadox: this draft was declined because the sources cited are not sufficient to establish notability per WP:GNG. (I also don't think they meet the minimum requirements for inline citations per WP:BLP, but that wasn't the reason for declining on this occasion.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:57, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

19:36, 31 May 2023 review of submission by Mo.arif078
Sir with due respect i want to say that there are many villages which are not more defined like their history demography importance etc. So please accept my draft page and published it and I promise to improve and add more and more information to this page....kindly reply me sir and assist me ... It's new for me Mo.arif078 (talk) 19:36, 31 May 2023 (UTC)


 * I assume you refer to Draft:Makanpur (Fatehpur)(you wrote "question of published" where the draft title should go). One sentence will not be accepted through this process. If you have additional information, please add it before resubmitting. This doesn't have to be done quickly, but you should have at least three sources summarized.
 * Please see other stuff exists. Other poor articles existing is not a reason to add more. There are many ways inappropriate content can get past us. We can only address what we know about. You may help us by identifying these other articles you have seen so we can take action.
 * This process is voluntary; you are free to place the draft in the encyclopedia yourself, but you would be taking your chances. If you are inexperienced in article creation, please stick with this process. 331dot (talk) 19:57, 31 May 2023 (UTC)