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06:59, 16 June 2024 review of submission by David.G.82.21
Dear reviewers,

Thank you for taking the time to review and provide feedback on the article. I have re-edited the content to align with the suggestions, ensuring a neutral and encyclopedic tone. The updated context now highlights the achievements of various players, such as Raoni Medina and Jordan Matthews, who have each secured the top scorer position multiple times in different seasons. The fact that Alejandro Maroto is the all-time top goal scorer is presented as part of the overall statistics, consistent with the way top goal scorers are featured in other Wikipedia articles about football or basketball. His picture in the main frame follows this established practice.

Additionally, regarding the feedback about unverifiable information, the main references are the official NFL and NFS websites, where the goal statistics can be checked. Please let me know if there are any other changes you would like me to make. I appreciate your time and constructive feedback.

Kind regards, David David.G.82.21 (talk) 06:59, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * The draft looks to me like original research. The paragraphs of text (which are generally the most important part of a Wikipedia article) are almost unsourced. You would need some reliable source which discuss specifically the subject (in the title) - not just Futsal, or the leagues, or clubs, or players. ColinFine (talk) 17:04, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

09:01, 16 June 2024 review of submission by Khawar2003
I just published my article on said topic but it's showing some kind of error. Kindly check it so that I may upload it. Thanks Khawar2003 (talk) 09:01, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Khawar2003: the only thing I can find in your contribution history (that hasn't been deleted) is – is that what you mean? It hasn't been submitted yet. And in any case, it's not in English, so wouldn't be accepted. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:37, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * I don't see that it's showing any error. If you tell us exactly what you see, and why you think it's an error, someone may be able to help you. However, I have seen two problems. Firstly, you have posted three copies of the same page, two as drafts and one as a user page. There is no benefit at all in having more than one copy of a page, and it can cause problems, as making it difficult for editors to keep track of changes. I have therefore deleted two of the copies, leaving Draft:Electromagnetic interference on Modern day communication systems in place. Secondly, the pages you have posted have been written in Urdu, but this is the English language Wikipedia and all contributions should be in English. You may like to contribute to Urdu Wikipedia. JBW (talk) 10:52, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks a bunch for your time and help. I'll do what you said and inform you if my problem has been resolved or not. 103.151.46.65 (talk) 05:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Just created an urdu Wikipedia page and published my very first article. Thanks again @DoubleGrazing, you are a life saver. Looking forward to work under your guidance and continue sharing my knowledge with the world and edit some stuff. Thanks again 103.151.46.65 (talk) 05:48, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

10:12, 16 June 2024 review of submission by Countystat
Hi - I had a new draft article and it seems to has disappeared and been redirected.

Please can you help?

Re below is what it shows - where/how can I assess the Draft:Dave Conlon (football coach) - I was trying to have this as a page. Thank you in advance

Stockport County F.C.[edit]

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(Redirected from Draft:Dave Conlon (football coach)) Countystat (talk) 10:12, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Countystat it seems the article was turned into a redirect by with this edit. Since the draft was already accepted, this is no longer an AfC matter. I'd recommend asking at the Teahouse or the Help Desk.   [[User:CanonNi ]]  (talk • contribs) 10:17, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the reply Countystat (talk) 10:27, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Inre redirected that article because it is presumably notable and quite likely to pass an AFD. However, when an article need more improvement or not yet for a standalone article, we redirect. I have anyway, restored the article and tagged it for improvements. @Countystat, remember any other editor can draftify it at any time or redirect back. Thanks! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 10:27, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Countystat (talk) 10:28, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

15:28, 16 June 2024 review of submission by Viv moira
He is known and well-integrated in the occult scene (e.g. contact to DuQuette, Sanders, etc.). All sources are secondary, some even published academical. What else could I do? Maybe I used the wrong category. Viv moira (talk) 15:28, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

16:11, 16 June 2024 review of submission by HCR24
Help with WP:NPROF HCR24 (talk) 16:11, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * I received a comment from an editor that my draft of H. Glenn Penny might meet WP:NPROF, if I "remove the primary sources or ones directly connected to the article. (See WP:PRIMARYSOURCES, and WP:SIRS)."
 * Am still new here, can you please advise which sources I would have to remove from the draft of article for the article to be accepted?
 * Help much appreciated. Thank you! HCR24 (talk) 16:13, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The earlier version of the article was sourced with references too close to the subject. However, it has been published to mainspace. Incase you plan on writing articles, e.g an academic, and author, always find well written reviews of the book they had written. Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 21:35, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

17:00, 16 June 2024 review of submission by MintSpiral
This submission was denied despite meeting sufficient notability guidelines, which I confirmed in live support. The reviewer has not provided any further information regarding the reason. At a minimum, 1, 2, 5 and 11 of WP:MN are satisfied. MintSpiral (talk) 17:00, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Courtesy ping @SafariScribe  Qcne  (talk)  18:54, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The sources are not reliable as they seems like advert. I have move the article to mainspace with consideration of the charts. @MintSpiral, you may now add reliable source to the "Early life and career" section to verify the contents desirable of citation. Thanks @Qcne for the courtesy ping. Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 19:32, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

18:56, 16 June 2024 review of submission by Li-reg
Hello, my draft (Draft:Yeshayahu Folman) is still waiting for a review and I would love help with it... Thank you! Li-reg (talk) 18:56, 16 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi @Li-reg, as stated the review process may take three months or more, as this is a volunteer process and drafts are reviewed in no particular order. There are 3,300 drafts waiting to be reviewed.
 * I'll note there are a couple of statements in your draft without in-line citations i.e. his education and the personal life section.  Qcne  (talk)  19:01, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Subject is deceased, and this doesn't seem like the sort to have BLP protections extended to two years postmortem. —Jéské Couriano v^&lowbar;^v  threads critiques 19:23, 16 June 2024 (UTC)