Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/November 2023 Backlog Drive/Participants/GraziePrego


 * 1) Declined Draft:Koen Timmers at 2023-11-01T00:28:49Z (diff; ; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Invalid declined as "resume-like", is not substantially like a resume. Comment, "It needs his birthdate, place of birth etc", is not an AfC criterion. asilvering (talk) 18:59, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Sparsh Suman at 2023-11-01T00:56:53Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 0 days)
 * Pass correct decline sources are insufficient to pass WP:GNG Theroadislong (talk) 17:56, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Ferdinand Jan Ormeling Sr. at 2023-11-01T00:58:44Z (diff; v; had been pending for 0 days)
 * Fail subject is clearly notable under WP:NPROF; declined for sentences lacking citations, but every single paragraph is cited properly. asilvering (talk) 19:05, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Azure Service Bus at 2023-11-01T01:00:10Z (diff; corp; had been pending for 0 days)
 * Pass indeed, no new sources were provided. asilvering (talk) 19:01, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Zowie Intertainment at 2023-11-01T01:02:34Z (diff; corp; had been pending for 122 days)
 * Fail sources are sufficient to pass WP:NCORP? Theroadislong (talk) 17:48, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Chris Jandric at 2023-11-01T01:04:03Z (diff; v; had been pending for 122 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan at 2023-11-01T01:08:00Z (diff; v; had been pending for 123 days)
 * Invalid, "Generally good, but some rewriting needed" is not a valid decline reason; article has 40 footnotes and unfootnoted paragraphs are simple statements of fact (ie, easy to verify, or to remove and pass the article if notable) asilvering (talk) 20:33, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Figure (company) at 2023-11-01T01:09:39Z (diff; v, corp; had been pending for 122 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Manmohan Misra at 2023-11-01T01:11:48Z (diff; ; had been pending for 122 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Umkhokha: The curse at 2023-11-01T01:12:34Z (diff; nn; had been pending for 114 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:Woja Emmanuel at 2023-11-01T01:13:17Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 114 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:Yael Hacohen at 2023-11-01T01:14:10Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 114 days)
 * 6) Declined Draft:Corning War at 2023-11-01T01:14:48Z (diff; v; had been pending for 115 days)
 * 7) Declined Draft:Glory to the Mother at 2023-11-01T01:18:45Z (diff; ; had been pending for 122 days)
 * Invalid. "Incomprehensible definition". Definition is not incomprehensible. asilvering (talk) 01:40, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Haikubox at 2023-11-01T01:20:51Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Invalid. While slightly promotional, the draft at the time had links to independent reviews, and could have been accepted. Ca talk to me! 12:06, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:George "Fish" Smart at 2023-11-01T01:22:02Z (diff; v; had been pending for 118 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Yaakov Beasley at 2023-11-01T01:22:33Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 117 days)
 * Pass. Sourced only to non-independent sources. Ca talk to me! 12:06, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Hariz Kamarudin at 2023-11-01T01:23:07Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 118 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Irulil Ravanan at 2023-11-01T01:24:05Z (diff; film; had been pending for 118 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Pach Chhoeun at 2023-11-01T01:25:00Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:More Than Just A Party Band Film at 2023-11-01T03:41:52Z (diff; film; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:Simone Collins at 2023-11-01T03:43:41Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 117 days)
 * Pass correct decline sources are insufficient to pass WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 17:59, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Lionel Bailly at 2023-11-01T03:44:11Z (diff; v, prof; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Charge to 100! at 2023-11-01T03:45:36Z (diff; ; had been pending for 116 days)
 * Invalid, declined for excessive use of quotations. I'm completely confused by this; there were almost no quotations in the article when it was declined. asilvering (talk) 01:48, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * There were, they were removed in the next revision after I declined it. Here
 * GraziePrego (talk) 20:56, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * @GraziePrego Yes, that is "almost no quotations" - only three, in a long article. Please don't decline articles for things that can be fixed in ten seconds of normal editing. That is not a valid AfC decline. -- asilvering (talk) 02:33, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:John Varnell at 2023-11-01T03:48:45Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 116 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:I Gedé Gita Purnama Arsa Putra at 2023-11-01T03:49:34Z (diff; v; had been pending for 116 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Matt Rutherford (sailor) at 2023-11-01T03:50:12Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 116 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:Battle of Anandpur (1695) at 2023-11-01T03:51:28Z (diff; context; had been pending for 116 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:Foundation Prayas at 2023-11-01T03:55:46Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 116 days)
 * 6) Declined Draft:Art Carnuntum at 2023-11-01T03:56:16Z (diff; nn; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 7) Declined Draft:Daniel Dugan at 2023-11-01T03:57:46Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 8) Declined Draft:James D'Angelo at 2023-11-01T04:00:11Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 9) Declined Draft:Ad Verdonk at 2023-11-01T04:00:43Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 113 days)
 * Pass, limited references asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Bill MacKay (musician) at 2023-11-01T04:01:34Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 112 days)
 * Pass, these are good sources but not quite enough; the music decline or a tailored comment would have been helpful but isn't required asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Stephen Beaudoin at 2023-11-01T04:40:50Z (diff; v, adv; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Invalid, sources are fine, article isn't advertising, and the comment about DoB is unhelpful. The question is whether he is notable or not. asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Parisa Dehghani-Tafti at 2023-11-01T04:41:56Z (diff; v; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Pass, sources are basically all about the election, presumably not notable yet asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Sébastien Bubeck at 2023-11-01T04:43:02Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Fail, h-index over 50, that's quite high, at least high enough to deserve a full AfD discussion. asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Kayla Compton at 2023-11-01T04:44:06Z (diff; v; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Pass, agree asilvering (talk) 04:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Mark Steven Morton at 2023-11-01T04:45:08Z (diff; ; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Fail, "too many long quotes", but there were only three quotes, none long, when this was reviewed. Multiple multi-reviewed books, WP:NAUTHOR pass. asilvering (talk) 01:53, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Bade Miyan Chote Miyan 2023 at 2023-11-01T04:48:16Z (diff; ; had been pending for 121 days)
 * Pass no indication this film has begun principal photography asilvering (talk) 01:57, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Edwin Savundra at 2023-11-01T04:52:24Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Deborah Shaffer at 2023-11-01T04:52:55Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * Fail sources are sufficient to pass WP:GNG with numerous notable awards. Theroadislong (talk) 18:08, 1 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:George Fite Waters at 2023-11-01T05:22:33Z (diff; v; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Sukumar Thekkepat at 2023-11-01T05:22:52Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 3) Declined U-Theatre at 2023-11-02T01:23:37Z (diff; ; had been pending for 118 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:Time-traveller UFO Hypothesis at 2023-11-02T01:43:53Z (diff; ; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:Maryellis Bunn at 2023-11-02T01:45:07Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 6) Declined Draft:Crank Magnetism at 2023-11-02T01:46:42Z (diff; essay; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 7) Declined Draft:Banchenko Algorithm at 2023-11-02T01:47:34Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 113 days)
 * 8) Declined Draft:Friedemann Zenke at 2023-11-02T01:48:29Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 114 days)
 * Fail; comment was "Missing basic biographical details like date of birth", but adding these would violate WP:DOB asilvering (talk) 20:56, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Richard Verdi, OBE at 2023-11-02T01:49:31Z (diff; ; had been pending for 114 days)
 * 2) Accepted Thomas E. Moore at 2023-11-02T01:50:49Z (diff; had been pending for 109 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Holochain at 2023-11-02T03:08:47Z (diff; web, adv; had been pending for 109 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:An Taigh Cèilidh at 2023-11-02T03:09:59Z (diff; v, nn; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:Yuriy Voronyy at 2023-11-02T03:10:40Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 6) Declined Draft:Pavel Brázda at 2023-11-02T03:11:08Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 7) Declined Draft:Mark Noone at 2023-11-02T03:11:29Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 8) Declined Draft:Grand Slam Knox at 2023-11-02T03:12:15Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 9) Declined Draft:LingoAce at 2023-11-02T03:13:58Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 10) Declined Draft:The Investigation of Taiwan’s Historical Materials in Early Period of Japanese Occupation at 2023-11-02T03:15:10Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 11) Declined Draft:Maung Maung Tin (prince) at 2023-11-02T03:15:44Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 12) Declined Draft:Adin Dobkin at 2023-11-02T03:17:04Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 13) Declined Draft:Il canto dei Sanfedisti at 2023-11-02T03:17:51Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 14) Declined Draft:Boom Box Post at 2023-11-02T03:18:13Z (diff; v, corp; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 15) Declined Draft:Sam Kbushyan at 2023-11-02T03:18:49Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 16) Declined Draft:Aleph Katz at 2023-11-02T03:19:20Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 17) Declined Draft:Judi Marmel at 2023-11-02T03:31:52Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 18) Declined Draft:FleetPride at 2023-11-02T03:32:39Z (diff; v, corp; had been pending for 112 days)
 * 19) Declined Draft:The Caterpillar at 2023-11-02T03:33:49Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 112 days)
 * 20) Declined Draft:Sam Hazledine at 2023-11-02T03:35:04Z (diff; ; had been pending for 112 days)
 * 21) Declined Draft:Blaine Lourd at 2023-11-02T03:35:52Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 22) Declined Draft:Ozaki Hotsuma at 2023-11-02T03:36:12Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 23) Declined Draft:Guillermo Escobar Aldasoro at 2023-11-02T03:37:00Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 24) Declined Draft:Zheng Wen Guan at 2023-11-02T03:37:30Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 25) Declined Draft:Michele Guaitoli at 2023-11-02T03:37:46Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 26) Declined Draft:Paradisoterrestre at 2023-11-02T03:38:57Z (diff; v; had been pending for 121 days)
 * 27) Declined Draft:Sallie Aprahamian at 2023-11-02T04:41:31Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 28) Declined Draft:Paul and Kris Scharoun-deforge at 2023-11-02T04:42:15Z (diff; ; had been pending for 117 days)
 * 29) Declined Draft:Robin Kester at 2023-11-02T04:43:47Z (diff; v; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 30) Declined Draft:Zhao Manqin at 2023-11-02T04:44:18Z (diff; v; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 31) Declined Draft:Bill Parker (broadcaster) at 2023-11-02T04:46:13Z (diff; ; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 32) Declined Draft:Jakob Kudsk Steensen at 2023-11-02T04:48:23Z (diff; v, adv; had been pending for 111 days)
 * 33) Declined Draft:Poshtkuh Shamil at 2023-11-02T04:49:13Z (diff; context; had been pending for 111 days)
 * 34) Accepted Operation Moongose Azteca at 2023-11-02T04:50:41Z (diff; had been pending for 111 days)
 * 35) Declined Draft:Big Society (band) at 2023-11-02T04:52:07Z (diff; v, corp; had been pending for 111 days)
 * 36) Declined Draft:Gordon Botterill at 2023-11-02T05:15:07Z (diff; v; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 37) Declined Draft:Vylet Pony at 2023-11-02T05:15:49Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 38) Declined Draft:Shrinivas Acharya at 2023-11-02T05:16:34Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 106 days)
 * 39) Declined Draft:Runi Khan at 2023-11-02T05:17:14Z (diff; v; had been pending for 109 days)
 * 40) Declined Draft:Rosa Maria Locatelli Kalil at 2023-11-02T05:17:51Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 109 days)
 * 41) Declined Draft:Wilf Perreault at 2023-11-02T05:19:11Z (diff; ; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 42) Declined Draft:Rojin Shakya at 2023-11-02T05:20:04Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 111 days)
 * 43) Declined Draft:Sant Isher Singh at 2023-11-02T05:22:31Z (diff; v; had been pending for 120 days)
 * 44) Declined Draft:Unified Walloon at 2023-11-02T05:23:51Z (diff; v, essay; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 45) Declined Draft:Shio Khetsuriani at 2023-11-02T05:28:13Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 105 days)
 * 46) Declined Draft:Michael Serapio at 2023-11-02T05:34:26Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 110 days)
 * 47) Declined Draft:The Cornwall Seeker at 2023-11-02T05:36:21Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * Invalid "Same comment as before", but the editor had fixed the article before resubmission asilvering (talk) 17:29, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Teddy Santis at 2023-11-02T05:37:10Z (diff; ; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Benedict Sheppard at 2023-11-02T05:37:41Z (diff; v; had been pending for 108 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Dmitry Osipov at 2023-11-02T05:38:25Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 107 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:Grooved stone beater at 2023-11-02T05:38:56Z (diff; ; had been pending for 107 days)
 * 5) Declined Draft:ITSCI Programme at 2023-11-02T05:40:41Z (diff; v; had been pending for 107 days)
 * 6) Declined Draft:Haikubox at 2023-11-02T05:52:47Z (diff; v; had been pending for 1 days)
 * 7) Declined Draft:The crew (2023-2029 YouTube movie) at 2023-11-02T05:56:18Z (diff; web; had been pending for 0 days)
 * 8) Declined Draft:Dovid Kronglass at 2023-11-02T05:57:57Z (diff; ; had been pending for 0 days)
 * 9) Declined Draft:Assembloid at 2023-11-02T05:58:34Z (diff; essay; had been pending for 0 days)
 * 10) Declined Draft:The Eyal Ofer Pavilion at 2023-11-02T06:00:25Z (diff; v; had been pending for 105 days)
 * 11) Declined Draft:Sayyed Jamaleddin Asadabadi University at 2023-11-02T06:01:05Z (diff; corp; had been pending for 104 days)
 * 12) Declined Draft:Former Handicraft Exhibition Hall at 2023-11-02T06:23:42Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 105 days)
 * 13) Declined Draft:Celeste Dell'Anna at 2023-11-04T01:53:05Z (diff; bio; had been pending for 78 days)
 * Pass, indeed, total lack of sigcov asilvering (talk) 00:26, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Accepted Kai Carlson-Wee at 2023-11-04T01:57:19Z (diff; had been pending for 72 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Yara Elmjouie at 2023-11-04T02:07:20Z (diff; v; had been pending for 76 days)
 * 3) Declined Draft:Ryan Blumenthal at 2023-11-04T02:09:59Z (diff; v, bio; had been pending for 73 days)
 * 4) Declined Draft:Swiss 8 at 2023-11-04T02:20:10Z (diff; adv; had been pending for 86 days)
 * Pass submission needed some cleanup for neutrality. InterstellarGamer12321 ( talk &#124;  contribs ) 13:38, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Accepted Owen Purcell at 2023-11-04T02:35:08Z (diff; had been pending for 73 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Bothnian Coastal Route at 2023-11-04T02:38:27Z (diff; nn; had been pending for 72 days)
 * Pass, under-sourced, low-information stub. It would have been nice to give a more helpful decline comment for this new editor, since it's probably a notable topic - but that isn't required. asilvering (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:SureWerx at 2023-11-04T02:39:16Z (diff; corp; had been pending for 80 days)
 * Pass, no WP:CORPDEPTH here asilvering (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Theater Camp (soundtrack) at 2023-11-04T02:41:21Z (diff; mergeto; had been pending for 85 days)
 * Pass, agree that the sources better support this being so closely related to the film that it belongs in that article at present asilvering (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Peter Virdee at 2023-11-04T03:07:58Z (diff; essay; had been pending for 80 days)
 * Pass, this might even count as an attack page? and I suspect AI generation in the content. asilvering (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:D.E. May at 2023-11-04T03:12:14Z (diff; ; had been pending for 79 days)
 * Fail, declined for WP:NPOV, apparently on the basis of a single word (!!). WP:NARTIST pass for work in permanent collections of several art museums. asilvering (talk) 00:13, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Not on the basis of a single word.
 * ''"His workroom was dark, the windows covered with fiberboard, the room lit by desk lamps. (He described himself as nocturnal; a reporter of one profile was instructed not to call until after 1 p.m.) His found materials - scraps of cardboard, old maps, old papers, old stamps - were stored in stacks of catalogued cardboard boxes.
 * May was described as “decidedly analog.” He hadn't owned a car since 1977 and got his first phone, a landline, at the age of 47."''
 * This whole part is still written in an unencyclopedic tone in my opinion, it's almost salaciously? Like you're informally describing something dramatically as part of storytelling. I accept he's notable enough but I think I was right to raise an eyebrow about the way that part was written. GraziePrego (talk) 01:09, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * You are crucially omitting the Profiles of May noted his quirks. that immediately precedes "His workroom is dark." Again, if it is not truly egregious and can be fixed by normal editing - and anything only a few sentences long can be - it should not be declined. Here is WP:AFCPURPOSE: Articles that will probably not survive should be declined. Issues that do not affect the likelihood of success at AFD (e.g., halo effects like formatting) should not be considered. You could not possibly delete this article on the basis of these sentences. -- asilvering (talk) 12:28, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Derix Glasstudios at 2023-11-06T05:07:47Z (diff; ; had been pending for 49 days)
 * Not sure what to say here: the decline is for tone, but the obvious problem is that it doesn't meet WP:NCORP. asilvering (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Declined Draft:Dillion Winfrey at 2023-11-17T10:33:06Z (diff; v; had been pending for 2 days)
 * 2) Declined Draft:Les gens d'Uterpan at 2023-11-17T10:57:31Z (diff; v; had been pending for 2 days)