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 * Can it make my coffee for me? :) User:Example 10:59, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Feedback from 1.39.58.156 (6 April 2011)

 * Was the Wizard helpful to guide you in creating an article ?
 * Yes to a large extent.


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 * Pretty clear and concise - but I got lost between the numerous links.


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 * I need myself to be covered on Wikipedia - and need some one to help me do that else I can provide all the details - since you suggest I should not write about myself to avoid conflict of interest. My name is Kubra Sait.

Feedback from Sock7215 (8 April 2011)

 * Was the Wizard helpful to guide you in creating an article ?
 * Absolutely not


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 * Mostly


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 * No


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 * If the subject/matter you are describing didn't have to be "Notable"


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 * I want to write an article on my band, but we haven't even started playing together in the basement yet... is there any way I can bypass the filter?

Feedback from 117.206.95.113 (13 April 2011)
ya yes No It should me more interactive The article i planned to write is about a place called Maramalai. The word has been mentioned in an wikipedia article about " Kanyakumari". I am in fact one of the first to know about it completely. I can give my photos as proof. anyway it is disappointing to know that i cant publish it.
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Feedback from Abdallah el kheir (28 April 2011)
yes yes
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 * not really


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Feedback from Parvesh960 (2 June 2011)

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 * yes


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 * not all...when it comes to appropriate articles explanation,it is not clear


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 * yes


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 * yes


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 * I would like if when the writer is creating his page also,he receive some help..

Feedback from AliCarbovader (4 June 2011)

 * Was the Wizard helpful to guide you in creating an article ?
 * Yes! Of course


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 * Yes. Written in very simple language


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 * Yes. The wizard was complete and with enough


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 * No need!


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Harold Carlton, Writer, Novelist and Journalist.

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Feedback from 86.147.137.20 (22 June 2011)

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slightly difficult as am dyslexic
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Feedback from 119.160.126.107 (30 June 2011)

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 * yes


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 * yes


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 * yes


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 * allow more user


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 * it is good

Aamir Mahmood 00923456214947

Feedback from 119.160.126.107 (30 June 2011)

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 * yes


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 * yes


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 * yes


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 * allow more user


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 * it is good

Aamir Mahmood 00923456214947

Feedback from 119.160.126.107 (30 June 2011)

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 * allow more user


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 * it is good

Aamir Mahmood +923456214947 i was born in karachi the business heart of pakistan

Feedback from Rayan9807 (1 July 2011)

 * Was the Wizard helpful to guide you in creating an article ?
 * it can help me more knowleged and to know what are the facts.


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 * writting...YES


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 * ending


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 * i do my best so that i can make better.

Rayan Castro +639194615863
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 * thank you. i have no comments with this page.

Feedback from 41.2.106.222 (3 July 2011)

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 * no


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 * boring
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 * no

create a profile on George John Zacharias (he is a lawyer in south Africa and a cousin of princess Charlene Wittstock of Monaco his father was high in the army, he and his children have been featured in magazines and newspapers throughout their lives, his mothers family the Huberstones also have a town named after them in England and on his fathers side are of Greek decent you have millions of useless profiles where as I think George should be mentioned somewhere He was born April 23rd 1958 you can find him on Facebook and twitter with the John ps he is like the 30th george in his family
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Feedback from 180.191.53.103 (10 July 2011)

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Feedback from Tabs41 (14 July 2011)

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 * No I was left in a dead end with no explanation


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 * No


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 * No


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 * I wanted to register a "Saying" but was lead in to a dead end with no options or explanations.

Feedback from 71.195.239.251 (18 July 2011)

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 * no, it did not list anything in a coincise 1.2.3. order but constantly redirects me to try and prevent me from doing my main objective, sending me through LOOPS of FAQ's, searches, guidelines, and etc etc


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 * NO! NO NO NO NO NO!


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 * IT dead ended, i couldn't continue with article suggestion creation


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 * Read comments

I know you try very hard to prevent iditos from making articles, and this means making articles more and more difficult to actually get to creating. But I was not even able to comprehend this system at ALL and I had a tiny litte suggested article that I really wanted to add to up the quality of wikipedia. But that is never going to happen now because I hit a dead end and am extremely frustrated with the whole system.
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Seeing as I'm apparently about to create some sort of "page" with this post I should have just put it all here and dumped it on you guys to wade through. That's what you wanted after all, right, complete control?

chesshashank
Actually this is an account of shashank(in INDIA).he play chess thats why the full name is chesshashank

Feedback from 99.241.211.143 (25 July 2011)

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 * No Too complicated


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Need an entry for Fanlit http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-fanlit.htm
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Feedback from 96.248.99.102 (26 July 2011)

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 * I did not create an article

As a member of the Technical Staff of RCA Laboratories at Rocky Point the demolition of the 425 ft. towers was both dangerous and interesting.
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 * The history of the Radio Corporation of America (RCA) is very good.


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 * Yes


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 * There are always items of history that can be added.

In the history item "in 1962 engineers from Bell Laboratories developed---24 digitised voice calls--etc.". In 1953 a 24 channel TDM was placed in commercial operation by RCA Communications to send audio information between RCA's facility at Broad Street, New York and their transmitting station at Rocky Point and the receiving station at Riverhead, Long Island, New York. The communication was by a microwave system throughout Long Island. The experimental TDM system was developed by RCA Laboratories between 1950 and 1953. Proof exists by way of Patent #2,919,308 filed 3/23/1954 entitled "TIME DIVISION MULTIPLEX SYSTEM FOR SIGNALS OF DIFFERENT BANDWIDTH" by H.L.COOKE.
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 * My comments have to do with the history of Time Division Multiplex ( TDM) (See Wikipedia time Division multiplexing history).

Feedback from 98.85.229.245 (27 July 2011)

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 * No


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 * no


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 * no


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 * no


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 * no

Feedback from 71.179.214.25 (2 August 2011)

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 * Yes the wizard help me and guide me in creating a article


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 * What was easy to understand was how to capitalize and stuff like that


 * Was it complete enough, with enough details ?
 * Yes it was and I understand it


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 * By sending this article to Selena family


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 * No other comments

Feedback from 70.160.135.118
Yes
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Yes
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 * By keeping it

It was perfect
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Sterile Gauze
Sterile gauze is used for absorbing fluids as well as dressing and protecting wounds. First aid kits often contain several different forms of it, like pads, bandages, and rolls. Sterile gauze is manufactured to accommodate every possible type of wound that may require it. It is also designed for different purposes. Some products are specifically created to add cushioning by use of a wider weave, while others feature a tight weave to increase absorbency.

There are many different applications for sterile gauze. Doctors and dentists often use it to absorb fluids during a variety of procedures. A dentist may use rolls of gauze to absorb excess saliva and blood while doing such work. After a dental patient has a tooth extracted, the area may be packed with gauze to protect the wound and absorb blood.

A person administering first aid usually begins by assessing the patient’s wound to determine what type of bandaging it may require. If the wound is small, the person assisting may be able to clean the wound, apply antibiotic ointment, and protect it with a bandage that is suitable for the area. Most households keep these bandages on hand because they are useful for dealing with small wounds. A bandage often consists of a plastic or a cloth strip that has adhesive and a sterile gauze pad on one side. Big wounds may require more extensive cleaning and bandaging with a large form of gauze.

Feedback from 74.82.68.160 (10 August 2011)

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Feedback from 14.194.19.13 (11 August 2011)
yes
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 * yes almost


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 * i guess


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 * I think editing article in wiki is very tiresome. For example i dont know how to put a reference to a statement i have written. I searched for it but cant find. Please design a website that tells how to do things in wiki. I know there is lot of help articles. Just combine in one place so we can get what we want.

if you simplify the editing process, it would be great and i would edit wiki very often.
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Feedback from MyNameWasTaken (15 August 2011)

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 * Yes and no. Generally quite clear, but I felt at times that when information was condensed into a topic header it became unclear. For example, on Not quite yet one section is headed as Sources are (nearly) everything but then goes on to explain reliability of sources. I appreciate the encouraging wording, but from my experience looking for sources I would never say that nearly everything is a source.MyNameWasTaken (talk) 00:36, 15 August 2011 (UTC)

Feedback from 166.205.142.68 (17 August 2011)

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 * no


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 * no


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 * no


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 * Let us do it and have an ai check it to see if we did it right


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Feedback from 79.74.87.9 (20 August 2011)

 * Was the Wizard helpful to guide you in creating an article ?
 * Did not cover my terminology


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 * Not easy - gave up


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 * Too much detail - just wanted to add a phrase.


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 * K.I.S.S. I cannot even see the send button to 'send' you this feedback !!


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 * I won't bother again.

Feedback from Eggshells (24 August 2011)

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 * Yes


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 * Yes


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 * Yes


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 * Too much wording. It was very confusing. Simpler texts would help (as in: less words).


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 * The step-by-step process was my favorite part.

Feedback from 2.98.229.173 (25 August 2011)
NO YES YES A WAY OF CONTACTING AN INFO CENTRE THE BAND I WAS WRITING ABOUT IS CALLED THE IRON DOOR CLUB AND ARE QUITE POPILAR, BUT I DON'T THINK THEY ARE POPULAR ENOUGH. CAN YO FIND OUT?
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Feedback from Samer.hc (28 August 2011)

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 * Yes


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 * Yes


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 * If you had a WYSIWYG editor in Wikipedia, the Wizard would be much more usable for non-techies.


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 * Neat work! Helping newcomers and increasing usability is the way to go!

Feedback from 135.196.234.99 (29 August 2011)

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 * Yes


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 * No


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 * Any description involving the Me 210/410 Luftwaffe fighter/bomber should include close up images and an evaluation of the port and starboard Mg 131 rotating barbettes and their defensive effectiveness against allied aircraft during World War II.Were allied aircraft taken by surprise by this ingenious defence system? Were German pilots able to adequately defend their aircraft with these electrically operated bulbous turrets without destroying their rear tail control surfaces!? And obviously the Me 210/410 barbettes being unmanned had a major advantage over the B17 Flying Fortress side fuselage gunners who lost crew during Me 109/163/262 and FW 190 and FW TA 152 high altitude firing passes. This historical consideration seems long overdue.


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 * One wonders if it would be more cost effective to send in Me 262 replicas against Colonel Gaddafi the Libyan tyrant for the same devastating results at a fraction of the cost !!

Feedback from 196.29.220.101 (8 September 2011)

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who knows you?
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Hollydale primary school By Khairul Amin
In Hollydale primary school u get to learn very good n the teachers n students r very kind so if u try to get a level that u want then tell any teachers that u know and u have 2 work hard aswell in the lessons. headteacher:MRS Thompson

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Feedback from 50.82.120.24 (9 September 2011) white government//civil/military

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Feedback from 208.66.198.182 (12 September 2011)

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 * Package Muhammad

Feedback from 92.98.98.212 (20 September 2011)

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 * making one for kids

i like animals!
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Feedback from 65.97.118.5 (26 September 2011)
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 * dick

DICK
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Feedback from 121.96.217.25 (27 September 2011)

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Feedback from 70.83.218.37 (27 September 2011)
La mayoría de los apellidos antiguos, típicos y característicos de Cardona rememoran a santos: Santa María, Santasusana, Santandreu (San Andrés), San Marti (San Martín), Sancristófol (San Cristóbal), etc… Basados en la gran influencia religiosa, los grupos nómades se reunían en torno a la veneración de sus santos… Sabemos que el culto a San Cristóbal comenzó alrededor del siglo XI… Así construyen capillas, entierran sus muertos y los recuerdan en esos lugares, hacer celebraciones, etc… Finalmente se establecen grupos de personas alrededor de éstos oratorio, construyen casas y son reconocidos de acuerdo al Santo en relación… Por lo que a nuestros antepasados se les designa como los “De Saint Christófol”… Cada una de éstas Masías se convirtió en un verdadero centro feudal. Por ello están ubicadas en la cima de extensos montes, donde se desarrollaba la agricultura, ganadería y actividad forestal. Junto al Conde que vivía en el Castillo de Cardona, quien era el responsable de la seguridad de los ciudadanos, cada una de éstas Masías conformaban una organización cívico social, donde incluso se celebraban matrimonios acordados… De todas esas Masías la única que posee capilla integrada y de diseño rectangular, es la Masía Sancristófol… La Masía Sancristófol data del siglo XIII… Pero el comienzo comprobado y documentado, por el momento, de nuestra línea corresponde a 1503 con Joan Santchristófol heredero de la Masía, casado con María (Madona). Es bueno hacer el alcance que en éste tiempo la herencia era hacia el hijo hombre mayor en su totalidad. Produciéndose así una herencia directa de la Masía, sin subdivisiones. Por ello la mayoría de los otros hijos ingresan al ejército a al sacerdocio, como una manera de asegurar su futuro. Lo que lleva, por consecuencia, que el grado de descendientes comienza a disminuir. Esto asociado a la gran cantidad de guerras que se producen en Cataluña… Al matrimonio de Joan y María le sobreviven solo dos hijos: Bernat (heredero) y Magdalena… Bernat se casa con Johana Grataconills, de la Masía Grataconills. Evidenciado así los pactos y/o uniones estratégicas existentes… Claro que también pudo ser solo una unión por Amor y solo Amor!!! Miguel Jaime Juan fue el séptimo y último hijo del matrimonio formado por Francisco Antonio Sancristófol Alsina y Maria Clotet Coma. Según dice su Acta de Nacimiento, finalmente encontrada!!!. Nació en La Coromina numero 15 un 29 de septiembre de 1874 a las 22 horas. Lo fue a inscribir su padre al Ayuntamiento de Cardona (Municipalidad), al día siguiente, como era la tradición… Se llamó Miguel, porque justamente nació el día de San Miguel. En La Coromina, una pequeña comuna o barrio ubicado a 5 Km. de Cardona y donde se ubicaban las parcelas, tierras de cultivo y el molino. La Coromina se encuentra, además, más próxima a la Mas Sancristoful. La familia Sancristoful Clotet vivía en la calle principal de La Coromina, de igual nombre, que hoy corresponde a la calle de La Iglesia, ya que finaliza justamente allí… La familia poseía su propio “Estanco”, especie de minimarket de la época. Hay que mencionar que junto a la venta y distribución de productos, muchos de los cuales eran de su propia producción, el tener la patente o permiso de dicho estanco era un gran privilegio o mejor dicho una gran inversión, que al parecer solo ellos la tenían en La Coromina. Antonio Sancristoful poseía además tierras y cultivos, principalmente viñedos y olivares, en asociación con su hermano Ignacio. Los primeros hijos del matrimonio fueron José, nacido en 1854 y Raymundo nacido en 1856. Según se comprueba en el censo de 1857. Al parecer estos hijos murieron muy pequeños, ya que no se encuentran en documentos posteriores. En 1859 nace Rosa, le sigue Mariana en 1861 y Carmen en 1863. Lo más probable es que se haya producido alguna pérdida o muerte de algún o algunos hijos, ya que se constata un salto desde 1863 hasta 1870 con el nacimiento de Emilio y de Miguel en 1874. Según se evidencia en el censo de 1880. Hay que tener presente que debido a las sucesivas guerras y conflictos hubo muchos saqueos y quema de documentos. Por lo que toda la historia que hemos podido reconstruir se ha podido lograr gracias a la sobre posición, correlación, conexión y comprobación de diferentes documentos… De los documentos que se salvaron de toda ésta destrucción… Sumado a esto, la Familia que encontramos en España, a excepción de Francesc que sigue con nosotros ésta búsqueda, no tenía mucho conocimiento de la historia de nuestra familia… Esto siempre me ha causado un gran asombro e inquietud!!!... Cómo una familia con tanta tradición y tan típica de una zona de España pudo casi perder toda su historia???... Los documentos fueron revisados en el 2005…Solo se encontraron los Censos de 1857 y 1880. Pudimos revisar los libros gracias a la colaboración de Andreu Galera, historiador encargado del Archivo de Cardona… El Acta de Nacimiento de Miguel Sancristoful la recibí por correo después de casi 6 meses de intentar diferentes fechas de nacimiento… De seguro que tenía tan cansado al jefe del Registro Civil de Cardona, Sr. Juan Soler, que finalmente buscó sin importar la fecha exacta… Debido a que en el Acta de Defunción se establece como año de nacimiento 1878 y a pesar que acertamos en la fecha (29 de septiembre) el año finalmente es 1874!!!... Es realmente muy difícil subir todo el Árbol Genealógico de la Familia... Lo he intentado, pero por un lado, es muy grande y, por otro, se necesita éste programa espeial, que facebook no lo acepta... Pero aquí publico la Línea Directa desde 1502 hasta Miguel Sancristoful Clotet... Queda un ramo ascendente aún sin conexión, pero si lo logramos subiriamos hasta 1300 y algo... Además, tengan presente que éste no es el relato oficial...!!!...

Feedback from 41.89.160.6 (30 September 2011)
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