Wikipedia:WikiProject Australia/Peer review/Murray William James Bourchier

Murray William James Bourchier
The article has been substantially rewritten and expanded since initially assessed as Start class. Suggestions on improving the article, particularly the section on his political career, would be appreciated. Dbromage 05:54, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

Peripitus
Just a few belated thoughts on what is a good start:
 * Drop the "trivia" section and incorporate into the main text.
 * Expand the lead to say two paragraphs rougly covering the article
 * There seems some recentish news articles on him that could be used to expand from google news archive
 * For his political/personal career I'd look for information to answer
 * How he became the representative for the Victorian Farmers' Union
 * What was the margin/vote in the elections he participated in
 * Policies proposed/enacted while he was in the leadership of the Country party
 * Why did he resign from parliment, what was he specifically knighted for ? Was he ill for a time before his death or was it sudden
 * Was his health responsible for the drop from leader->deputy leader. If not what was the reason.

- Peripitus (Talk) 23:24, 6 October 2007 (UTC)