Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Andrew Saul


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The result was fail.

Andrew Saul
I am nominating Andrew Saul because I know that it is extremely close to becoming a featured article. As it stands now, the piece comprehensive, verified, contains no original research, and in line with all policies. It may need a few style changes and some copy editing, but nothing that should preclude it from A-class that I can see. It will help to have some fresh sets of eyes and collaboration.

I'd just like to say before hand that I realize it is long. It is about 9,000 words, most of the 70Kb is actually markup. I know that the first part of the TSP section and the TSP Funds probably have the least to do with Saul himself, however I think explaining them is integral to understanding the rest of the article for a nonexpert user. I realize the funds portion is nearly verbatim from the TSP wiki-article (which is itself verbatim from the TSP government website), however I am not a finance expert and I'm really not qualified to explain it any better then it already is.

Anyway, I hope that you will support Andrew Saul for A-class and eventually FA-class as well. MrPrada 07:51, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment - Article undergoing peer review. Will look at it after finished such review. -Duribald 17:08, 4 September 2007 (UTC)


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