Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Carl Hayden


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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

Carl Hayden
Article that I have been working on and that IMHO is of A-class quality. --Allen3 talk 17:53, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment: Referencing is good. A few grammatical concerns ("Senate" should always be capitalized for instance). Election material should be integrated into the material on his term in office. Some discussion of the circumstances in which he became a member of the US House should probably start that section, before just saying he gave the jail house keys to his deputy. Also, frankly, I'd like to see that directly sourced or replaced with something less colorful, but more exact. Clarification of whether he only had one deputy and that party assumed the office through filling a vacancy and/or running for it separately would be welcome. A few more categories and links to other extant articles would be appropriate as well. John Carter 18:07, 2 November 2007 (UTC)


 * I have reorganized the article text as requested and corrected the listed grammar concern. A second reference for the sentence you question has been added (the first was used as a source for the mentioned sentence and the three sentences that directly followed and was placed at the end of the supported text). As for your request for addition links, what appropriate articles and categories are missing? --Allen3 talk 22:15, 2 November 2007 (UTC)


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