Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Lance Bass


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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

Lance Bass
This comprehensive, carefully sourced article was recently promoted to Good Article status. As its sole major contributor, I am seeking to get additional feedback, because I'd like to move the article towards FAC. I requested a peer review several weeks ago, but unfortunately have had no replies. I believe the article is very strong, but this is the first one I've ever worked on to this degree, so I am hoping to continue to learn from experienced editors about top quality at Wikipedia. Thanks! --MgCupcake 22:53, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment - The only real drawback I can see is that the article contains a few single-sentence paragraphs, which are contraindicated by the Manual of Style. John Carter (talk) 14:34, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comment. I did notice that there were a few single-sentence paragraphs, and I merged them. All of the paragraphs in the article are now two sentences plus. --MgCupcake (talk) 01:16, 27 November 2007 (UTC)


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