Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Arthur Sullivan

Arthur Sullivan
Trying to move this article towards FA-class, so all suggestions for improvement are welcome. Adam Cuerden talk 16:47, 18 October 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Nice material, but you have some work to do here! Some suggestions:
 * Expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
 * Citate the article. One of the basic FA criteria.
 * Add ISBNs in the books you mention in "References". And keep them there only if you citate them. Otherwise, move them to a new section (e.g. "Further Reading") or delete them.
 * In "Musical Quotations" I think you should make the prose a bit more coherent and solide. These In... In... In... and the short pars are not so nice.
 * In "Reputation and criticism" there are too many quotes. This is not good for the article flow. Try to keep only those absolutely necessary and the other quotes incorporate them in the prose. I also think that some material from this section would better fit in "Life and Career", but I don't want to spoil your structure. Get some more opinions about that and about the length of "Reputation and criticism".
 * Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
 * I'd prefer this "Wikisource" thing somewhere at the end of the article.--Yannismarou 13:19, 19 October 2006 (UTC)