Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Berkley Bedell

Berkley Bedell
Over the past few days, I have worked on expanding this article from a stub to a real article. At this point, I think it is well-referenced and somewhat thorough. I must admit that I am proud of it, but I must also admit that there is room for a lot of improvement. That is why I am posting here - I want input from more experienced editors on how to improve this article. My goal is to bring this article to GA status (and maybe eventually FA.) Thank you to anyone willing to help. Minute Lake 03:24, 11 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 15:27, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, the third suggestion is, I think, the result of an error. I think it is considering the dates in references. The first two I really wish I could fix, but there are no free-use images of him available (the only chance is if one of his images falls under fair use.) Thanks. Minute Lake 15:43, 11 October 2007 (UTC)