Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Billy Campbell (doctor)

Dr. Billy Campbell
I'd like to improve upon this article and bring it up to a good or a good article rating. Please make any suggestions necessary. GA Eulogy4Afriend 18:34, 8 January 2007 (UTC)

Yannismarou
It needs work. Some suggestions:
 * The article must acquire a proper lead per WP:LEAD, and a proper structure per WP:LAYOUT. As it is now the structure is problematic.
 * The article should also be properly cited per WP:CITE.
 * Try to avoid stubby sections like "Personal history".
 * Trim the "see also" section, and incorporate the links in the main text, if they are really necessary.
 * Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
 * Why is the article's title "Dr Billy Campbell" and not "Billy Campbell" or "Billy Campbell (doctor)" if there is a disamb. problem?
 * Expand the article with more infos. Right now it is somewhere between stub- and start-class.--Yannismarou 10:21, 9 January 2007 (UTC)