Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Charlemagne Tower

Charlemagne Tower
I am seeking a peer review of this article because I invested a lot of time in the research and writing of it, and would like to make it as good as possible. Bowie60 (talk) 00:48, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Javascript review
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 14:41, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs, and adequately summarize the article as a whole.[?]
 * You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article. Though not all editors like them.[?]
 * Please consider adding  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context, Build the web and Manual of Style (dates and numbers), years with full dates should be linked; for example, if January 15, 2006 appeared in the article, link it as January 15, 2006.[?]
 * Headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it could be changed to  ==Biography== .[?]
 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article-please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
 * This battle is considered a Union victory
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations.[?]
 * This article needs footnotes, so that readers can see from where particular information is taken. See WP:CITE for an in depth guide.[?]
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * I would recommend merging the "Death" and "Legacy" sections, as very short sections are generally deprecated.