Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Dwight Lauderdale

Dwight Lauderdale
I'm submitting this article for peer-review. Basically, it's the second article I've written, and because it's about a living person (and I tend to write somewhat "flowery". )  I want to make sure this article meets wiki's standards. (It's definetly got references!! ). Feel free to leave a note about what got changed over there. Thank you !  KoshVorlon  > rm -r WP:F.U.R     23:01, 9 November 2008 (UTC)