Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Edward Manville

Edward Manville
I hereby request a peer review of the article Edward Manville, with particular attention to the following: I am not certain that these are in order and would like other opinions on the matter.
 * 1) Adherence to the requirements of neutral point of view
 * 2) Adherence to the requirements of formal tone
 * 3) Grammar and other aspects of correct use of language.

Смерть Интернет тролли! Sincerely, SamBlob (tlak) 02:11, 16 June 2013 (UTC)