Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Geoffrey Pyke

Geoffrey Pyke
I have extensively re-written this article and I think it is shaping up rather nicely. Perhaps, GA status.

Can other contributors find additional sources and/or suitable images?

Gaius Cornelius (talk) 14:30, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Javascript review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 14:56, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
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