Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Hellyeah

Hellyeah
Article on a recently formed supergroup would like to go for GA and eventually FA. Thanks. M3tal H3ad (talk) 04:57, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

LuciferMorgan

 * "Blabbermouth.net reviewer Done Kaye commented "with little of the complexity of Mudvayne or angularity of Nothingface and much more of the full-on, pedal-to-the-metal style of Vinnie Paul's previous work", however, he said the songs "Star" and "Thank You" border on musical cliché.[13]" - Split into two sentences. LuciferMorgan (talk) 17:15, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * "A DVD titled Below the Belt was released on November 13, 2007, and featured performance footage from the making of the album, first studio sessions, coverage of the band's world tour, and personal interviews." - Has there been any critical reception for this DVD? IGN maybe? LuciferMorgan (talk) 17:20, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Nothing on IGN and i don't see any professional reviews., yet


 * "Paul felt two guitarists...", "passing through 30 cities..." - this should be consistent. It should be either "two" and "thirty", or "2" and "30". LuciferMorgan (talk) 17:22, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * "However, Ruhlman believes Hellyeah is not a notable variations from members previous bands.[12]" - Variations? A band is classed as one entity, so is therefore a variation (ie. singular). LuciferMorgan (talk) 17:23, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Done, Thanks. M3tal H3ad (talk) 02:10, 20 November 2007 (UTC)


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