Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/James C. Duff

James C. Duff
I edited this article to better conform to Wikipedia standards and would like some other editors to take a look at it to make sure I'm not missing anything obvious. Also, I really don't know about the section titles in the article. They don't sound very good to me, but I couldn't think of a better way to divide them at the time. The names and section-break placement are open for discussion. I'd like to get this article up to GA standards if we can. — OranL (talk) 08:25, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Too short to be judged. The citation-tags need fixing, the article should be expanded to go further the stub status, and the last stubby section is a "Personal Life" or "Family" section; note what its heading declares.--Yannismarou (talk) 19:40, 17 June 2008 (UTC)

Javascript review
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 14:38, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * This article has few images. Please see if there are any further free use images that fall under the Image use policy and fit under one of the Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, if January 15, 2006 appeared in the article, link it as January 15, 2006.[?]
 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as it could be. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
 * Very short sections should ideally be either expanded or merged.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]