Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Jay Presson Allen

Jay Presson Allen
I have written a few biography articles lately, but can't seem to get any above B-Class. I am hoping to find out what I need to do to this one to move it from B-Class to Good. Thanks for any advice you can give me. EraserGirl (talk) 01:42, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

Javascript review
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program: You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 11:38, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should summarize the whole of the article rather than just be three-sentences.[?]
 * Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Image use policy and fit under one of the Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: wouldn't, couldn't, wasn't, weren't, didn't, wouldn't, wasn't, hadn't, weren't, didn't, doesn't, didn't, wasn't, hadn't, wouldn't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.