Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Jay Severin

Jay Severin
I've never requested peer review before, and I hope that I'm taking the right steps. I've heavily edited the article on Jay Severin to comply with WP:BLP guidelines, but at least one editor fears that I may have gone too far (naturally, I feel that I was WP:BOLD). The subject is a controversial talk-show host, and I would appreciate input on WP:BLP compliance, sources, balance, NPOV, and completeness. Thanks! TreacherousWays (talk) 03:01, 2 July 2011 (UTC)