Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/John Pitcairn, Jr.

John Pitcairn, Jr.
This is my first 'from scratch' biography. Of course I'd love to see it become a FA, but I'd be quite happy with a GA. Basically, I would like some general feedback about the structure and level of detail, and to have pointed out any obvious bio-format errors I may have made.

Also, I really don't know what level of priority the subject merits - he was clearly one of the major entrepreneur/industrialists of the US (created a F500 company), but is far less known today than many others.

Thanks in advance! --wormcast (talk) 02:55, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * See HERE Anne Teedham (talk) 19:47, 17 November 2008 (UTC)