Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Lena Phoenix

Lena Phoenix
What I hope to achieve with this peer review. Navy.enthusiast (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Resolve the issue of the article's notability requirements
 * Make improvements to bring the article up to Biography WikiProject's B-Class, or better, by receiving suggestions from the reviewers or by improvements done by other contributers
 * Get the article's Class formally assessed

Javascript reviewer
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 17:45, 28 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Needs expansion! Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
 * Instead of just linking to the reviews, summarise them and use the external links as footnoted references. Be sure to include both good and bad reviews.
 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * Please see Image use policy, I don't think your sayso that Lena sent you the image by e-mail is sufficient. She may need to send an e-mail to wikipedia confirming that the image may be used.
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.[?]
 * Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Guide to layout.[?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]