Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Leon Sullivan

Leon Sullivan
I have requested a peer review because I am hoping to get this article to at least B status.

Dovcamp (talk) 05:34, 12 June 2008 (UTC)

Javascript review
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 15:24, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs and summarize the article as a whole.[?]
 * Please add some images. For example, there are some free use ones available of the seminary.[?]
 * Please consider adding  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * Headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it should be changed to  ==Biography== .[?]
 * Ideally, you should provide footnotes for quotes and parts of the text where you refer to a source. For example, "which he referred to as "Selective Patronage"." and "He said, "I found that we needed training..." should be referenced.