Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Louis Mountbatten, 1st Marquess of Milford Haven

Louis Mountbatten, 1st Marquess of Milford Haven
Hoping to bring it to FA standard. DrKiernan 13:09, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Cla68

 * Every paragraph should have at least one citation, even if it's a repeat of the citation for the following paragraph. It keeps the article from looking like it has uncited text.
 * You don't need to put citations mid-sentence, you can combine them at the end of the sentence.
 * You don't need in-line citations in the intro if the same information is repeated with citations in the main body, which appears to be the case here.
 * You don't have to have citations next to each other, you can combine them into a single citation.
 * The information that gives Mountbatten's opinion on something, such as the naval skills of the Turkish navy, should make clear that this is Mountbatten's opinion, not necessarily a generally recognized fact as the text appears to indicate.
 * Quotes that are four lines or longer should be blocked (placed in an indented paragraph-see the WP:MOS).
 * The last paragraph in the "final years" section needs a citation.
 * Identical citations can use the "refname" citation format to combine them in the footnotes section. Instructions on how to do it are here:.

All in all, a well-written, informative, and enjoyable article to read. Nice work. Cla68 04:21, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you! DrKiernan 07:43, 7 September 2007 (UTC)

AZPR
Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 00:36, 15 September 2007 (UTC)