Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Matt Mahurin

Matt Mahurin
This is my second contribution to Wikipedia, and it is very complex. I would appreciate any help with formatting or any other issues that veterans here may be able to help me with. Rezimmerman (talk) 01:04, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Similar to the Tim O'Brien (illustrator)'s article remarks. Nice lists (which when getting long can become a separate article), but not so much of content. The formatting is nice, and this is not my problem right now. Right now I would first like to see this biography enriched with material so as to go further the stub-class status.--Yannismarou (talk) 09:06, 18 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments from DrKiernan
I think the formatting is fine too, but I did remove some HTML syntax. If you want to include tables, they should be written in Help:Table wiki-markup. The way you've done the columns is fine.

Again, I would agree with Yannis: try to expand on the biographical text. DrKiernan (talk) 14:28, 20 June 2008 (UTC)