Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Nyron Nosworthy

Nyron Nosworthy
I want to make it as good as it can be. --Sunderland06 14:59, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

Automated review
The following suggestions were partly generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. Thanks, DrKiernan 15:23, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ done The article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Image use policy and fit under one of the Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
 * ✅ done Please add  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * ✅ Done Please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.[?]
 * Can somebody please rate this article. --Sunderland06 22:27, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

Yannismarou

 * Expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
 * "Sunderland" is full of choppy paragraphs making the prose choppy.
 * Second half of "Sunderland" is incoherent and full of trivia.
 * How many articles did you submit for peer-review? Are you sure you can work on all of them at the same time?--Yannismarou 11:37, 21 September 2007 (UTC)