Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Pope John Paul II

Pope John Paul II
This article is listed for peer review because it aspiring to be a 'Good Article'. It needs expanding in places but frequent criticism is that it is too long. This needs more opinions. You must bear-in-mind John Paul II was Pope for 27 years. Another criticism is tone of article, serious POV issues and hagiography. It is also suffering from undue weight and "synthesis of sourced". Prose sometimes wanders, but rarely flows. Length and tone are probably greatest issues with the fact that it is triffle "rigid". Needs improvement EtonLibrarian (talk) 19:28, 21 January 2009 (UTC)