Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Princess Elisabeth of Hesse and by Rhine (1895–1903)

Princess Elisabeth of Hesse
I would like to submit this B class article for a peer review in hopes of bringing it up to good article status. Please suggest any needed changes.--Bookworm857158367 07:19, 13 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:19, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Nicely done! I don't think I have many things to suggest, since the article looks to me quite comprehensive. Just a few remarks:
 * The inline citations go straight after the punctuation mark. Do not leave a gap between the punctuation mark and the inline citation.
 * 17 of the 22 citations are based on one book. I'm a bit concerned that the article relies so much on a single source. But this could be a problem for FAC; I do not think it is a major problem for GAC.
 * Since you have "References", there is no reason to have all these details of Sullivan's book in note 1. The same with notes 6, 15 and 19.
 * I see ISBN only for Sullivan's book (and in "Notes" - not in "References", where such details should be). What about the other two books published in 1997?--Yannismarou 18:48, 17 December 2006 (UTC)