Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Richard J. Maybury

Richard J. Maybury
I have just drastically expanded and illustrated and reorganized this article. I need to be reviewed! Esp: Should I remove the stub indicator? Johnzw 21:03, 5 September 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou
I think you can remove the stub indicator. I've rated as a "start article". These are some things you can do:
 * Expand the stubby sections you have.
 * Add more information about his life and re-consider the whole structure of the article. For start check WP:LEAD
 * GA and FA need references and inline citations.
 * When you citate a book, you must mention all the information about it (ISBN, publisher etc.) Check any Featured Article and you'll understand exactly what I mean.
 * "Journals & Newspapers" section could be merged with a new section (with sub-sections if necessary) about his life.--Yannismarou 18:01, 12 September 2006 (UTC)

I am having great difficulty uncovering information about "Moneyworld"; in fact I can find no indication that this publication even existed. Johnzw 02:30, 24 October 2006 (UTC)