Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Scott Bradley

Scott Bradley
I've attempted to improve this brief bio beyond start class, so I'd like peer review on my changes. Thanks! -- Big Scary Mike (Talk/Contrib) 20:20, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

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