Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Terry Dehere

Terry Dehere
I have just recently expanded this article. It is listed as a stub, but I have never worked on a stub before and am seeking feedback. I don't even know if it is ready to have the stub tags removed at this point. I would like to get this bio up to GA status, but need to find some more references and information on the subject. Jim Miller 13:43, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

CloudNine
A good start. A few comments:
 * Try to use the cite web format in your references.
 * Mention of early life in lead needs its own section. Who were his parents etc.? Check any featured biography, such as Michael Jordan, for more on this.
 * It would be nice if a free photo could be found; I'm sure politicians are keen to release photos. Try sending an e-mail; see Example requests for permission.
 * Lead will eventually need expanding per WP:LEAD.