Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Waite Phillips

Waite Phillips
Thank you for considering my Peer Review. Expanding the Waite Phillips stub was my first experience writing biographical information on Wikipedia, and I want to make sure that I am not violating any consensus rules that I'm not aware of. Also, I'd like to know how I can improve my writing. I don't think that I'll have time to take it to FA, but I would be happy with good article status. I went of on a Philmont trek last year, so the topic has a personal connection for me. Thanks for looking it over, Pnswmr 00:30, 10 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Comment Citations need to be added to the article. Oneworld25 06:08, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Article changes reverted June 10, 2007 due to copyright violation. Don't worry about further peer review yet, I need to find new sources. Sorry about the confusion! Pnswmr 16:18, 10 June 2007 (UTC)