Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Walter Abraham (town planner)

Walter Abraham (town planner)
Hoping this article may qualify for GA or A status. It has already been nominated (very shortly after its creation) by an admin (User:GeeJo) for inclusion on the 4 November 2006 "Do You Know" section of the Main Page.. so maybe even FA status might be a possibility.. Bezapt 17:14, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Nice start. The article can be GA. These are my remarks:
 * The lead is too short. It could be expanded per WP:LEAD.
 * Further information could be added in some sections. For instance, I think "Early life" could be further expanded. We don't learn much about his early life.
 * Speaking of "Early life", I don't see the nameds of his parents mentioned.
 * More photos would also be welcomed.
 * "Other career highlights" is stubby. Try to expand it a bit.
 * I would also like to have a few more assessments of his work (analysis of innovations, artistic aspects etc.).--Yannismarou 13:24, 6 November 2006 (UTC)