Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/William Bliss Baker (1st)

William Bliss Baker
This article has been expanded considerably, and I'd like to get it up to at least B quality. Any suggestions would be helpful. I've been hunting really hard to find his exact birth date, but it's hard to find things like that back in the 1800s. Any suggestions are welcome. Thanks!··· 日本穣 ? · Talk to Nihon joe 18:19, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Nswinton

 * The first sentence needs to be re-written. It's not dry and encylopaedic, it's conversational.
 * Did he have any family?
 * Did he have any other interests?
 * What kind of injury from the ice skating incident?
 * I'm not sure a full listing of all his work is necessary. Maybe just list the most notable stuff?
 * Another image would be helpful at some point.
 * Who were his contemporaries?
 * What were his influences?
 * Do you have an image of Baker himself?

Nswinton 21:16, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Yannismarou
Too short! Nswinton pointed out most of the content deficiencies. The article is well-cited, but it lacks necessary information. Tell us more about his life and art. Any pictures of him? Please, also read carefully WP:MoS, in order to see how we write and wikilink years and dates. In any case, I don't think that a detailed review would be now very helpful. Implement the current suggestions, expand the article, and then ask for a new review.--Yannismarou 11:15, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 02:12, 6 May 2007 (UTC)