Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/William Stanley (Victorian inventor)

William Stanley (Victorian inventor)
What I am looking for is ways to improve the layout of this article.

I have done a lot of research on Stanley (as can be seen by the references), and although all the information is present, I feel that it does not look right!

I would love this to be raised to Good Article status, as I feel that the information in it is sufficient for that, if the layout etc can be sorted.

This is my first article (or rather, my first substantial one), and so it is the first time I've submitted my work for peer review - so please be gentle! --  Phantom Steve  ( Contact Me, My Contribs ) 09:39, 19 October 2009 (UTC)