Wikipedia:WikiProject China/Peer review/Battle of Wuhan

Battle of Wuhan
This article was a stub with three sentences before I expanded it in July. I currently want to do further research & writing on this topic, and was hoping to get some peer reviews first for the article. AQu01rius (User | Talk | Websites) 04:45, 31 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Off to a good start. Lots of things to work on:

Overall, though, the most important thing is simply to add more material. This is obviously a major battle, and I'm guessing that there are enough sources available to expand the article significantly. Keep up the great work! Kirill Lokshin 02:23, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
 * More citations throughout (ideally from reputable historical works more so than from primary sources).
 * Massive wikification would be appropriate; most of the units in question should (eventually) get their own articles.
 * The list of commanders in the infobox seems somewhat excessive; I'd trim it down to the major ones only.
 * The lead should grow in proportion to the article, reaching an eventual length of three or four paragraphs.


 * This is improved, but still needs some work. It was one of the most significant battles of the second Sino-Japanese War, and can still use more detail.  It also needs heavy citation througout.  However, it is vastly improved, and I don't want to discourage an editor who put a great amount of effort into this!  You have gotten mostly there - do on and finish it up! old windy bear 15:20, 11 November 2006 (UTC)