Wikipedia:WikiProject Comics/Peer review/Scrooge McDuck

Scrooge McDuck
This article has a lot of potential but really needs some feedback from objective editors. The more details the better, would really appreciate it. Thanks. -- Wikipedical (talk) 01:51, 29 February 2008 (UTC)

A good start but it need a lot of more work. Skizzik (talk) 10:45, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * The hole article need to be referenced with reliable sources.
 * The lead should be a summery of the article. For example the discussion in the third paragraph is not mentioned in the body of the article.
 * The Money Bin should either be merged or the template be removed.
 * I think the names in "Also known as" in the infobox should be removed. He have lots and lots of nicknames used in a few stories, "The Master of the Mississippi" etc etc. "Uncle Scrooge" would be suitable here, maybe "The Richest Duck in the World" too.
 * "Comics history" is unbalanced. There are a lot of text about "Voodoo Hoodoo" and "Trail of the Unicorn", minor characters and things like his private airplane while more impotant stories like "Only a Poor Old Man" and "Back to the Klondike" is just mentioned in one sentence. Also more important characters like Flintheart, Beagle Boys and Magica de Spell are mentioned very briefly or not at all, same with things like money bin, number one dime etc.
 * The transition from supporting to main character when "Uncle Scrooge" was introduced in 1952 should be clearer.
 * More information about the time after Barks is needed.