Wikipedia:WikiProject Cricket/Peer review/Albert Thomas (cricketer)

Albert Thomas (cricketer)
Here is a new page, but i would like it to be peer reviewed if possible, thanks. It is the first article i have created since joing wikiproject cricket and i would like to know how i am doing. Steelback (talk) 12:48, 5 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Comments "right-arm batter" - sir, can't we use old English words like "batsman" instead of talking the way the Americans do.
 * The "adapted from ...." can be moved to a reference section in the end.
 * Would look better if split into a few paragraphs - done, only needed to add extra linesTintin 01:42, 1 August 2009 (UTC)