Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Peer review/Jack Sparrow

Jack Sparrow
I might as well begin a review of my work, copyedited by PNW Raven and a few others, regarding one of the most intriguing characters in recent film history. I rewrote this after viewing Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End, modelling it on Palpatine. Alientraveller 19:24, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

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Okay I don't see the need for a header as this is just one comment. Overall I'd say this article is fine, and in my view, is actually better than Palpatine. That said, some mention of Sparrow merchandise could be made - action figures etc. That seems to be the only thing that Palpatine has that this doesn't. Gran2 08:18, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

I thought it was a really informative article. However, I think parts of it need to be re-written to be more out of universe. See Manual_of_Style_%28writing_about_fiction%29. Good luck! Karanacs 20:58, 20 August 2007 (UTC)