Wikipedia:WikiProject History/Review/Peer review/Six o'clock swill

Six o'clock swill
This article was the subject of a former Australian collaboration. I am interested in views of other wikipedians as to what would make this article better, particularly for an audience who perhaps doesn't have an Australian background. Matilda talk 22:27, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

I think the introduction needs expanding so it gives a brief summary of the rest of article, rather than just a sentence on what the 6 o'clock swill is. An extra image would be good, and then you'd be well on your way to GA--Phoenix-wiki talk · contribs 19:26, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
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