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Birla Institute of Technology and Science
BITS, Pilani is considered as one of the premier technology Universities in India. There is a need to improve, add images and also peer -review this article. I have restructured the article. Some parts need to be expanded.

Vinwe 14:53, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

A good start, but still a long way to go. Here are the things to be worked on:
 * Review by — Ambuj Saxena (talk)
 * 1) Expand lead. include information on what thing BITS is famous for.
 * 2) A locator map should include all locations; not just the ones in India.
 * 3) The "Reputation and ranking" section can be converted to prose format. Also, try to include unfavourable rankings also.
 * 4) Create sections with same overall theme, rather than institute-based. That is, make a section on campus and include details of all the campus in paragraph format. Another section can be on "Academics" in which first point out what is common to all, and then state salient points of individual campuses in paragraph format.
 * 5) There should be single section on "Alumni" which should deal with both the chapters as well as notable alumni. State what the alumni have achieved; don't just state their names.
 * 6) Similar to what has been explained above, create a section on Student life and culture, and club all the fests, events under it. All fests need not have a separate section.
 * 7) Improve on references. Some sections completely lack them.

Get back to me if you need help. Regards, — Ambuj Saxena (talk) 12:25, 13 June 2007 (UTC)