Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/Kayastha

Kayastha
This article and the editors could use suggestions on how to improve it.


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:09, 8 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I'm unable to make sense of the article. I see the Kayastha trace from Chitraguptaji, but I'm unable to see how that fits in with the subcastes section or how that section's image fits with the text given there and how either relate to the subject. Context is needed for all unfamiliar terms. Then the NOTES: section gives three seemingly different definitions of the term with no reconcilation to what's in the rest of the article. Basically we're given almost no information on how the different information about the subject relates to the whole and to the rest of the information. For example how do the "sons of" sections fit in and why are they important? 2) The VEDIC ORIGIN note completely violates WP:NPOV and appears to be WP:NOR to boot. Work on organizing the whole article logically so it is clear how the parts relate, what are the important point, and provide context to ease the reader in. Also tell us how the information is known, from what sources, and if any are considered more reliable than others. - Taxman Talk 22:16, 8 May 2007 (UTC)